Reviews for EO Challenge: Breathless
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I want to rub Dean's quivering abdomen, please! Lots of lovely imagery in this one...:D
Nana56 chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Very nice! Perfect description of my poor boy. :D

Nicely done. :)
SimplyOut chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Very intense but beautifully done :D
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Aw, you know, I'm not exactly the tummy-hurt-loving type, but you've nailed it beautifully! "whispering frightened reassurance" - loved that one :-) Very intense moment - and I can so see Dean's huge terrified eyes and Sam's response to it - *melting*

xxx Kate

PS: Oh yeah, these boys should be relieved that you can't do with them whatever you like ;-)))
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Ouch that's gotta hurt!

bev x
Swellison chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
This left me (as you so aptly titled it) breathless. Your descriptions are cringe-worthy (in a good way) and dead-on.

Sue
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
This was great. I love the descriptions.
nwspaprtaxis chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Oh god, help me. *fans self* This... this was beyond hot. And this line kind of made my mouth all dry and I kind of blanked out: ""Sam felt trembling muscles clenching and flickering as he squirmed, gulping frantically, wild eyed with breathless panic. His belly convulsed under Sam's soothing touch, trying to force his paralysed lungs to do the job they momentarily couldn't."" Yeah. That. Yes. That. Please.
LaedieDuske chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
*whimper* Oh my. Is there a level beyond perfect? Because if there is, this is there. Holy gods you are GOOD. I'm just going to go back and re-read this.

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A few dozen times.

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Maybe more.

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Whoo. Thank you!