|Reviews for Possession|
| The Fox and Hen chapter 4 . 9h ago
I'm like, really jealous right now. One, because Lucy's super lucky and she doesn't even realize it, and two because you can seriously write for Nalu and I seriously cannot!
| The Fox and Hen chapter 3 . 10h ago
Ah! These things always happen in hour stories! Random kissing wigh practically no warning! But Ioved it because it was like that. This was super cute! Onto the next chapter!
| The Fox and Hen chapter 2 . 10h ago
*Nods sagely* hugging Erza is always the better option. XD what's with all the pregnant silences? That's a very intriuging comparison...
| The Fox and Hen chapter 1 . 10h ago
This is so not cli- well, however you spell the word that means overused and steroyped. It's so no that and I love it! Can't wait to see what comes next!
| Musica chapter 20 . 3/6
I really loved this story. What a great progression from friends to more, and the conflicts felt real (if a bit mature for Natsu, but that's ok. Boys need to grow up some time). Minor typos and stuff sneaked through, if you ever decide to edit the story, but great writing. Your descriptions and vocabulary were excellent. The parts I was most upset with were things you didn't write; did Lucy ever get back at Cana and Levy for their meddling (really early in the story), how Levy never noticed the mark from Natsu's necking (or how Lucy hid it), and never getting to read when Natsu -willingly- kissed her or anything beyond that (y'know, claiming his mate _). All in all, I sincerely enjoyed this fic and I'll be checking out your other FT stories in the near future!
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/2
I absolutely love how u ended your story, it's simply amazing( I can so see that happening) too cute.
| Paola chapter 20 . 2/26
I dont really like reading fanfics but canon Nalu couple changed my mind.. And this was the best Nalu fanfic I have ever read. Thanks for doing this.. :) Sooo great!
| An Elder Tale Survivor chapter 1 . 2/18
| Janderius chapter 20 . 2/18
It's been a few months since I actually read this, and I was actually still just a lurker (no account) at the time. I only started watching Fairy Tail around September, and have been hooked ever since.
I just want to say that your story is fantastic, and was everything I was hoping to find when I first searched for a NaLu fic.
I normally judge fanfiction stories on three categories:
-If the author managed to portray the characters accurately
-Quality of Writing
-How entertaining the story is
I think you knocked it out of the park with all three. It was adorable, it was sympathetic, it was perfect. I've been inspired to start my own since then. Even though I agree that NaLu is the best pairing, and everything in canon points to the two of them ending up together, I decided to write a [NatsuxMirajane] story. I picked them partly because I think their friendship just needs better development in the series, regardless. Another reason for that, though, is because I think your NaLu story is just about perfect, and there's no need for me to put my own spin on it.
Hope this wordy review makes up for me not posting on any of the other chapters! .
| long live marshmallows chapter 20 . 2/17
Ehh I should probably go back and review every chapter-it's that good :)
It's awesome how much the characters developed compared to what's going on in canon, and yet they are still so utterly in character! This was really fun to read! :D
| FutureMage chapter 20 . 2/12
That was amazing! SUGOI! Gaaaaah! I love this story! It's in my top twenty! Of all of them!
| OtakuLover43 chapter 20 . 2/11
That was an amazing story I loved every part of the chapters especially when they started to being a couple and definitely the end this is one of the best NaLu stories I've read it was really good
| reika19 chapter 3 . 2/8
omg. o_o ...i tried to read the part about lucy kissing natsu on the lips like 3 times just to make sure i didnt read it wrong. waaahhh! niceee!
| etn889 chapter 20 . 2/6
This is the best NaLu FanFiction I have ever read, Good Job mate.
| LimitedEternity chapter 4 . 2/3
I'm rereading this story in honors of our coming valentine's day, and it's even better the second time around somehow! I'm sitting here grinning and fangirling all over the place, you have created such a cute Natsu!