Good job on this awesome work! It really pulled on my heartstrings. Please keep up the good work.

11/10. This is my first nalu story that I read and youve really made me feel lots of things with story. I love it so much and really filled the gap that wasnt shown in the anime that much that they are more than friends and actually lovers.

I know I'm years too late, but this fanfic is really well written and full of emotions. Definitely one of the best NaLu fics I've read (imo). Thank you so much for this (if ever you are still active here and had the chance to read this comment of mine).

This chapter is 100% canon in my eyes, it's obvious gray had a thing for lucy before juvia, but he never went for it, why? because she's natsu's. The same with lisanna, never went for natsu again because he belongs to lucy.

Why did you make lucy flirt with every guy in the show?

Glad I found this again. Always was an excellent story!

Oooo this is too sweet reading from his POV.

I’m excited to keep reading! Love seeing Gajeel and Levy shipping.

Thank you for taking the time to write this entire story for everyone to read,
it made me fall in love with the characters even more. I wish I could read it for the first time again, its a shame you are no longer active on this account anymore but I hope you are doing well and continue to write :)

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I loved how well you drew out natsu's insecurities and indecision. Lucy was a lot less apprehensive than I thought she would be but I still liked her characterization.

Thank you for the story!

I'm a french reader but I LOVE your story. In that moment, it make my heart beat faster (sorry if I make some mistakes). Natsu act really like I imagine him when he found he is in love with Lucy. They are so cute! Now I'm questioning when Lucy will accept that she's in love too

So wonderful! I just finished reading Fairy Tail and it's actually my first time reading a Natsu/Lucy story because I always thought they were canon. I'm glad I crossed the line and read yours, it was marvelous!

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow...,... ok

So I finally read this story after 8 years it was published. I encountered this story so many times, in English and Spanishn and then I couldn't read English really well but now I'm glad I read the original.
I just loved this story. Your writing is excellent, I loved how you portrayed their developing into a romantic relationship. I just know it won't be easy for those two to start loving each other or accept their feelings. I just know Natsu is like your writing. it's just that the series doesn't show us that much of his feelings. Thanks for this amazing story