|Reviews for The Unrecorded Hours|
| Nanannacyy chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
such a longbutt oneshot but every single bit was worth it ;) makes me wanna cry because i seriously need to read the second/third book. ughhh, but noneless, im happy that two worked out in the end ;) straining my eyes to read each word till the end payed off, bwhaha
| DustWriter chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I'm completely blown away your talent. You grasped the emotional range and limitations of each character so clearly in this story; you have a deeper understanding of them and revealed this in a way that helped me understand Collins' characters better.
You have an incredible gift when it comes to lending visual imagery to emotional response. It comes throughout your story. For me specifically, the description of seeing Prim on the stairs when sunlight catches in Katniss' eye definitively describes the lingering and frequently painful love we carry on despite losing the one we love so much. You spoke volumes in a beautifully concise sentence.
I can't offer you enough congratulations or thanks for posting this work. I hope you plan on publishing your own works; I'd look forward to reading them.
| Olivia deLuca chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
That was sooo good! Very well-written.
| TwiGame chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
| firstadream chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
gosh. this was brilliant.
| Keeta11 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I am so glad I found this story, it is absolutely amazing and I found it really emotionally cleansing to read. After all the death and destruction in Mockinjay, this is a completely believable take on how Peeta & Katniss could have dealt with their considerable demons and found each other again. Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this!
| Telelli chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Sweet, beautiful, moving story. Very well-written.
| MiaCara chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
| Deserving Peeta chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
*sighs* Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
I first read this on LJ when I was desperately seeking more resolution at the end of MJ and have reread it so many times since I thought I should get a Log In just so I could tell you how much I appreciate this fiction.
You managed to retain the intensity, themes and
characterizations perfectly while showing how they mature and adjust together.
I wanted to tell you my favorite quotes until I realized it is pretty much the entire story. Your writing style is engaging and excellent.
Just thank you for sharing your talents and giving us such an incredible, mature depiction of Katniss and Peeta "growing back together."
| Immigrant Tomboy chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I've read quite a bit of fanfic over the course of 15 years, so I can say that I've seen the range of talent out there. I think this story is one of my favorites, and I know that because I'll probably re-read it a few times. I'm glad you weren't trying to write in the cold manner that Collins does- you do a great service by warming up P & K into more recognizably human people. I was worried at first, because it's harder to get into 3rd person perspectives, but you pulled it off well. It was mature- handling complex emotions deftly, but also whimsical- making me envy P & K's easy rapport in their better moments.
| Readingtoomuch chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
This is, without question, the gold standard; the finest fanfiction, of any genre, that I've ever read. In all future editions of Mockingjay, this story should be added to the end, and your name should be on the cover as a coauthor. Simply wonderful!
| imaginingmary chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
That was absolutely amazing. Stunning really. It really gave me closure of what could have happened in the Unrecorded Hours between the last chapter and the epilouge. 3
This was honestly one of my best reads yet.
| RageLikeRipred chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
It's the best thing written on this website. It was almost perfect, besides a couple pronoun errors and whatnot, inevitable things like that. But that aside, you had everything perfect: showing us how Katniss was with her grief, and her transformation with Peeta. Two things really struck me from the end part: talking about how Katniss wasn't afraid to see those images of her family anymore and embracing them, and not having any memory to run from or cling to. Both of those things highlighted the change in her. And you didn't just tell us she changed, you flawlessly showed us, because we noticed in the writing before that that she was always connecting a memory with every event. And they way you think to string words together is incredible. And you even nailed Katniss and Peeta's subtle insanity that the Games brought them! I don't know how you do it. I bow down.
| susannaholmes chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Okay, so this has got to be the best HG fanfiction I've read... Ever.
And I mean that in every possible way.
You're writing style is amazing, and I absolutely love how you were able to put so much into a oneshot - and have it feel so complete.
I really, really hope to read more amazing HG fanfictions from you in the future!
| Roberta Nunes chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Finally I can tell that I found an amazing Hunger Games' fanfic! Your history is so intense and strong, however very sweet and cute, too. I hope you will write more Hunger Games histories. I'm brazilian, then sorry for any mistakes in my English. Congratulations for the fanfic, again. )