Reviews for One Life, One chance
kalgal5 chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
i liked the whole story idea and plot, but everything happened a little too fast, try to slow it down next time, add more detail, stretch it a little. but, overal, it was a very good story, it shows that you have much potential!
threewhitedoves chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
weird, you must have read my mind! this was exactly the kind of Fic I wanted to read! very well done, even the end.
melissaadams22 chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Hi there,

OOH a little chilly here right now but it's warmer during the day melting some of this snow. LOL

This is a GREAT job, I enjoyed it a bunch reading it from start to finish and you should be proud of yourself. *Offers you a candied apple as a reward*

Thank you,