Reviews for To say Sorry
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7
Also fucking beautiful.
draco122 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
even more heavy then the first.
Wonderer chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
I wonder if you realize that Finn jerks off to Princess Bubblegum's hair, hence "Private Time."
IP chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
i'm not used to with a finn like that. (cursing and all) it's still really good though. keep up the good work!
Vector117 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
It's very interesting that you actually wrote that Finn kept that locket of gum/hair he got in "To Cut a Woman's Hair", which was actually seen in "What Was Missing", which makes sense; you, Mr. Author, just happened to be the first I've read who expounded such info before it was recognized by the creators. Kudos.
MewJollyRancher12 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
abby chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Summergirl23 chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
OK, I don't want you think I'm hating or anything,

but... didn't you say in your bio not to make a character act different then they would in the show and whatnot?

Isn't this a bit too sappy for Finn?

I know I do that sometimes myself, and don't get me wrong, I loved this story and the others; but I thought it was against your morals.

Really good stuff otherwise.

And I know nobody's perfect (hell, I'm totally imperfect) but I was just lol.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
you should make more foloing this letter
BurritoTown chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
oh my god i cried. so well-written. i love finn and bubblegum together, so this was heartbreaking for me, but it's so good it's going into favorites anyway. you're a very talented writer.
fanfiction net user chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
thats sadder then the first i wanna freakin cry
paxtofettel chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Yeesh, now that is depressing. I wonder if Bubblegum will find the letter and forgive Finn
MewLuna chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
I liked this one-shot :) I'm actually a FxM fan, but there's nothing wrong with FxPB. I like how you wrote Finn repentant and sweet, especially when he said he kept a lock of her hair. And in some views I see Marceline being like an older sister to Finn, especially in your view. :)
fanfictionfeminist chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
'a friend that is very cool and spunky', that part is so funny. I love this one even more than the first one. I am a FinnxMarceline person, but I think that it's cute that he said he thought of her as a sister he never had in this story. This is really great.
holyshizpickle chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Im a total marcie/finn fan but this...this might make me change my mind.

It's sad, and I love that it has NO Marceline bashing.

Marceline says she's disappointed in me…

She's right here as I write this letter…


She told me that it's my fault…

Marcie would do that, actually. Love these letters.
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