|Reviews for The Power of Envy|
| andreaubaldi40 chapter 2 . 2/2
nice story great ending i just wish i would have been longer
| A Comrade chapter 1 . 2/1
YES! FINAL FUCKING-LY! A story in which implies/says/states that Paul is/was/always will be the beta between him and Ash. Thank you.
Signed, the true
| PokeSpeBanette chapter 2 . 1/4
awww got any more?
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/9/2014
F u moron I want dat battle bite me suker
| JuJu-chan the Vampire chapter 2 . 5/16/2013
| MoonEyedStargazer chapter 2 . 3/1/2013
Ash wouldn't let pikachu go. Nice story though!
| Pokepornfan chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Plz tell me that you plan on making more chapters for this it's so good one of my fave fanfictions ever plz keep going with it it's a great story an Paul and Ash seem to fit well perfectly
| shadowfox9 chapter 2 . 10/14/2012
uhhh i FUCKING HATE CYNTHIA i mean honestly on black she is as hard as fuck to beat sry for use of fowl language loves story plz continue sry to say this though the kimono girls are as easy as crag to beat
| addictedtowolfsbane chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
Luv this storys so much u av to continue it
May is cool add more wth her in it
Oh nd maybe drew aswwell
Dawn sounds so jelous well suck it up bitches paul belongs to ash dammit so f all of u ikari suck coma rules
| Moonwolf3000 chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
O.O Wow...This was fantastic! :D This is going on my favourites!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Great story although Ash & Paul, I don't know...
| Melmel Phase chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
I LOVE the new Ash! I just wish Paul toped. *pout*
| Emerald Twin Blade chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
lol, I love fics that center around jealousy... I honestly got a little freaked when Gary took a drunken Ash home; thought he was gonna do something that might make Paul bring bodily harm to him. w lmao!
Great job, though! Can't wait to see an update! 0:
| xXTheRunawayXx chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
Wow! This is really good! I'm not usually a comashipper but I really liked this fanfic!
Can't wait to hear more!
| Pondering-Thespian chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
im not a fan of guy-guy relationships, but i read some of your other stuff and thought what the heck, might as well see how this one is. to tell you the true, i liked it. good job.