Reviews for Fumino's Birthday
animefanatic12123 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
awww so cute33
jiojspodjf chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
it was a little bland...there was no intresting surprises in the plot, and the writing wasnt very exciting. but its good that you kept true to the characters! i cant stand fanfic's that have the same character have a totally different personality.

mostly good job...but you need to give the story something more, something to make it memorable or exciting. hope this was helpful
frakengirl12 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Kyaa! Kawaii! It's soooo good! Please write another one! Its soooo cute! Keep up the good work! 3
XxTheStorytellerxX chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Really cute U

Congrats on your first fanfic!
Krissy2lip chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Very cute! I enjoyed this very much! :]