|Reviews for The Ostiary|
| Getsunohimesama chapter 16 . 2/23
This chapter is perfect! :D
Seto and Rei's relationship seems to be less antagonistic than what I would expect but I suppose it's normal since Rei seems to barely allow herself to aknowledge that she feels something for Seto.
I forgot to mention it in my previous review, but I can't help but admire Jou and his fighting spirit, because although it goes despite what he was ever taught, he is ready to fight to right a wrong, though how right the way he seems to be inclined to follow is, I am not sure.
I was absolutely shocked that Endymion managed to survive Yami's wrath upon what he said. I swear, that guy has zero survival insticts! I can't help but wonder though, will Yami kill him later or just forget about him?
Serenity and Yami's reunion was what I expected from you and maybe more, especially with the slap Serenity gave Yami for being so crude to her. Congratulations!
| Getsunohimesama chapter 15 . 2/23
Diamond must be the character that annoys me the most during Sailor Moon other than Darien and you sure got a great grip on his character. I loved how Serenity sent him packing both times.
Poor Hotaru... I was really sad to find out she dies.
Seto doesn't have a single romantic bone in his body... It sounded like he was actually making a deal with Rei!
| Getsunohimesama chapter 14 . 2/22
Wow, the confession of Yami's feelings for her, the sheer depth they have, is unbelievable! You capture them in a way that is simply... well, I guess amazing should cover it?
Jou's (second) interruption of something that could become very awkward in the future was funny and deadpan-causing at the same time. I laughed so hard I got myself a belyache! Oh, I bet Yami is about to tear him apart! :D
| Getsunohimesama chapter 13 . 2/22
What a chapter!
Mai's and Rei's bickering was absolutely hillarious, especially when Rei came back with the "new" dress, which I assume was the old one with some adjustments... Though it just has to be said, Lord of Atra is quite the player. I wouldn't be surprised if he "stared in awe" towards half the female population that night.
Talk about possessiveness. Yami's obsession with Serenity is kind of annoying, considering that he can't even accept the fact that it was nothing but a trick on Serenity's part to complete the task and an unwilling one at that.
| Getsunohimesama chapter 12 . 2/22
Girl, does Yami sound like a stalker...
I laughed many times while reading this, although I felt a bit sad when Serenity tried to explain to Yami why she avoided restarting a relationship with him like the plague. I really wish for a hapy ending for the both of them.
As for the flashback in the beginning of the chapter, it was really quite bitter, what with the goodbye between Serena and Yami... Also Mina's grief for Bakura's "death", although not given more than a couple of lines to describe it, it was tagging at my heart, mainly because I felt there weren't much to be described in her anymore and not for a long time after that.
| Getsunohimesama chapter 11 . 2/21
The scene of Akane's death, although it was really harsh it was also very realistic. The only thing that surprised me is why Yami didn't simply incapatitate her in order to... "punish" her accordingly. Making clear that it was really violent and a bit scary, he appeared to be quite "merciful" compared to what he did to his other opponents.
Serenity saving Reiko was something I am really glad for. Being the only one to truly stick to her ideals, it would be kind of unfair to her to see her not only allowing but asking for someone's -probably torturous-death.
Akane was such an idiot but her end after that particular stunt she pulled with Serenity was kind of blatant. However, although Reiko makes it clear that she loves Akane, I don't see why she would assist to Serenity's (re)capture and not allow her to escape, especially after all the warnings Serenity gave to Nyanko and to her. I would say that it was because of the Tauk, but she saved Serenity from being bitten, something that tells me she was worried.
| Getsunohimesama chapter 10 . 2/20
Wow, hold it! So in Bakura's body "resides" Zorc but ALSO Bakura? And apparently after 4000 years of friendship between him and the Pharaoh he turned on him? Or is it Zorc twisting his thoughts? The Bakura you introduced us so far, both in this story and its side stories, would never allow ANYONE to call him "slave"! Could you please explain this to me?
Akane kind of freaks me out... She is just too vain and lustful for her own good. And being intimate with Reiko in front of others... God, that totally creeped me out!
I love how you build Mai and Jou's relationship slowly, so that it is not based on lust but rather mutual admiration and friendship-soon-to-be-love!
| Getsunohimesama chapter 9 . 2/20
Jou simply rocks! For a change he sent Kaiba packing! Also, I really liked how Yami made him inderstand that he will eventually have to truly fight if he wants to defend his sister from any harm... though I doubt it would be needed.
Seto having to kill Mokuba... I believe he would first slit his throat. On the other hand though it would be dishonorable to let him live. Well frankly I don't get how he could actually go through with this, honour or no honour. But I can see now why he hates Yami so much.
| Getsunohimesama chapter 8 . 2/20
I love every chapter that is included in this story, but this one most definitely takes the cake! :D
That comment that Bakura made about Mina, despite being undniably crude, compared to what he said while dying in Serena's flashback, makes someone easily understand that something is wrong.
The flashback in itself was very well written and touching... Especially Mina's grief and the way Bakura proved his love for everyone through sacrificing himself...
I loved the last scene with Yami and Serenity. Maybe she should be a bit more careful or think this through...? Nah, then it would be no fun! :D
I believe it was pretty obvious who Rini's father is, though I can't help but wonder, how is it possible for Serenity to get pregnant from yami since 1)they are different speacies 2)vampires are not capable of this form of reproduction and 3) as Serenity said they haven't been together for the past thousand years?
| Getsunohimesama chapter 7 . 2/20
How annoying. Anyone would be enranged to see the way Yami acts towards Serenity, not like the Queen she is, but like he is dealing with a spoiled child... I do believe they are crazily in love with each other, it's painfuly blatant. However a bit more respect from Yami's part wouldn't be bad. Serenity had every right to act the way she did.
I am not sure how I feel about Bakura being alive, but I do know that I feel awful about Mina. Will she come in later?
| Getsunohimesama chapter 6 . 2/20
Silly Jou, nothing is EVER enough to satisfy Kaiba's ego! If it wasn't for Yami and Yugi it could go on growing for ever and ever and ever...
Why would Yami trick Serenity if the others had already decided to ambush Kalseru?
Yami is so possesive that it's bordering on obsession! Would he really go as far as to kill Serenity's husband in case she got married? Would he pay so little mind to her feelings?
| Getsunohimesama chapter 5 . 2/20
Yeah, restraint. Now let us go and torture Weevil to death. (rolls eyes)
Seto and yami's dialogs are making me laugh like a maniac every time! It's quite miraculous how they interact with each other for so many days without having some kind of showdown...
| Getsunohimesama chapter 4 . 2/20
Weevil being the greedy and lustful dwarf is the perfect role for his character, though knowing how he ends makes me feel kind of sorry for him.
Serenity being jealous is so sweet! I can't get why she tries to refuse that she loves Yami still, especially since she can't convince herself, let alone someone else.
| Getsunohimesama chapter 3 . 2/20
Poor Mina... I really hope there will be a happy ending for her as well.
Rini is such a cutie! And Jou is quite the goofball, isn't he?
I think that this chapter, although nothing THAT significant happens is one of my favorites. It has something bittersweet on it, but it could be only me...
| Getsunohimesama chapter 2 . 2/20
I can honestly say that I am really glad for the way Yami makes Endymion tremble in his boots. In fact, I wouldn't mind a punch or two either...
I was rolling with laughter many times while reading this! Poor Shimon, it's almost like he has to deal with five-year-olds!