I loved this! I didn’t understand at first why they were speaking like that, and then I imagined it was a period piece. Then you explained some phrases explaining it was from Victorian era.
I really loved this story! :)

I loved this beautifully written fic! Thank you

Beautiful beyond words

I hate it people use a lot of fluff instead of real content.

hes such a fuckin liar...he didn't tell he EVERYTHING. Sure he told her that he drank human blood but not what he did right BEFORE he drank it...go on Edward...tell her what a whore you are. That'll make her love you

That's what Edward did while feeding when he was newborn? He just went all whoreward? GRoss...just fucking gross

Edward says bella is my life now...yet he goes to another town...with the idea of finding a whore to fuck? Really? That tells me hes a piece of shit. ANNNNND I'm done, this Edward is a nasty piece of crap and bella deserves something less...USED

let me paint you? Seriously?

yes jack, paint me like one of your French girls! LOL

so fucking stupid

oh so shes his LIFE NOW? Now...AFTER he goes to the whore house?

I'm sure Bella would be sooooo happy to know that Edward goes to whore houses.
NO THANKS

he paints? ohhhh how riveting...

lonely
alone
hunger
good vs evil
I'm evil, why me

LOL this is boring as fuck!

Loves this! So glad I stumbled onto it.

I love how different you made
him, and yet, still the same!

I'm not sure I follow his reasoning, but...okay.

How could she possibly refuse?!