Reviews for Twelve Months
Eduardiana chapter 2 . 6/20/2014
"She makes her way onto my canvas. Peeking from behind a tree. Sitting in a field of flowers. Reclining on a chaise. Gazing out to sea."

"An unhealthy obsession for me; a dangerous one for her."

"Does her blood taste ripe and sweet, like summer fruit plucked straight from the tree? Or rich and decadent, like warm, melted chocolate?"

I'm loving this Edward. He does everything with so much passion. It's a good thing he can canalize all this obsession, this need through painting. At least for the moment.
Eduardiana chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
I found this story a few days ago and I'm loving it so so much.

"A dream; a pagan princess, dark and lovely. A fervent wish, born of my lonely existence" This has to be one of the most beautiful descriptions of Bella I've ever read.

The part when he was hunting was so well done "We all thirst-just in different ways" The fact that he doesn't look into his prey's eyes, that he asks for forgiveness. Amazing.
missmelly chapter 14 . 5/6/2014
Wow. You write so vividly, with such clarity. I am glad I found your story. Thank you for sharing it.
dinotopian chapter 14 . 3/26/2014
Thank you
jm1708 chapter 14 . 10/8/2013
Really beautifull story
MastersWriter chapter 14 . 7/8/2013
Oh my word! I absolutely adored this story. One of my friends suggested that I read and at first I was a little surprised, but the more I read the more I truly enjoyed. Thank you for such a wonderful story. There are so many points where I would LOVE to see Isabella's POV..such as when she first met Edward in the library or how she started to piece together his differences. I'll be on the look out!
edwardsfavoritebrunette chapter 9 . 5/27/2013
Way to go differentiating between his "house" and his "home" :)

seems like you've done so much research! The autumnal equinox and the Persian festival, wow. That's perfect. Glad Isabella is moving on from that wretched place.
edwardsfavoritebrunette chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
Very interesting story you have here with just enough detail to give us a scene but not too much as to bore us. I'm captivated!

"But I'm not human, so I sit, frozen in place until dawn breaks." I'm in love with this line. Absolutely beautiful.
dwright chapter 14 . 5/26/2013
Great story. Thanks for writing.
morena.davidson.3 chapter 14 . 5/19/2013
Thanks so much for writing this story. I have truly enjoyed reading it and am so glad you were willing to share your talent and imagination for me and many others to enjoy :)
divagils chapter 14 . 2/13/2013
This was just delicious and lovely. Thank you.
twiclare chapter 14 . 1/21/2013
Lovely, a really beautiful story, thank you.
twiclare chapter 13 . 1/21/2013
I'm so glad she stopped him from killing the man in the alley, that would have tortured them both.
twiclare chapter 12 . 1/21/2013
Lovely, but with a very dark twist at the end.
twiclare chapter 11 . 1/21/2013
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