Reviews for Smile
JimBeamer5 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
That was...nice. Thank you for the Rayne-fix!
ashie-loves-hiei-and-kags chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Very cute! i want a cookin lesson like that :-) thanks!
Awakened Soul chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
this was really sweet. i loved that you didn't make river too loopy and the interaction with jayne was great.
Dherea chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Wow! This was really...delicious! Keep them cooking! )
alisosia chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
so hot
Lyaksandra chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
This was very nice.

River felt a little out of character, and I don't mean her to speak in the third person or utterly riddled. But she seems too normal here, and you did mention she wasn't completely put together yet.
jane0904 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Sensual, and very lovely. I can imagine that Jayne would communicate a lot with his hands, since they're his main tool, in every sense of the word!