Reviews for But the Story Never Ends
Ash-Varnei chapter 18 . 2/23/2011
Doctor's perfect timing. But surely Joron will have someone guarding the cave?
scifigeekgirl chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
Awesome! I loved the ending - its just so them. I suspect Joron is on the way... Can't wait for the Doctor vs Joron confrontation even though I hope its Rose who clobbers him!
psykit chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
Brilliant. Just Brilliant.
Gangstamuppet chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
Aww, I love how this chapter ends too. :) That was perfect. You know that's exactly when the Doctor would propose, right in the middle of trying to escape imminent death. Haha. I have to say I appreciate how Doctor-y he is. I am fascinated by the idea of it actually being HIM instead of the metacrisis. Thanks for the good story and can't wait to read more!
Reader4077 chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
The Doctor can be a bit thick at times, can't he... :D hehe. But this is really well done! Please keep updating! What I am wondering if you're going to do something to extend Rose's lifeline to match The Doctor's? Just a thought.
MayFairy chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
yay this chapter was so totally cute!

i mean, sure they are trapped and i think joron is probably going to come back before tthey escape...

but they made up.

i loved the little proposal too!
Ayjah chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
Lol what timing.
DrRose chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
OMG! He asked her to marry him! She better say yes...I don't know why she wouldn't LOL!

I hope they can get away from Joron. I loved this chapter, very well written!

Favorite lines:

Neither one was sure who made the move first, but in a matter of seconds, their lips came crashing together in an exquisite and blinding kiss that left them both panting heavily when they finally came up for air.

"Did we just make up?" the Doctor asked breathlessly, his forehead pressed to hers.

"I think so," she breathed, seconds before his lips descended on hers once more.


"Rose?" he asked casually.

"Hmm," she replied distractedly as she chewed on her bottom lip and continued to pace.

"Marry me?"


can't wait for the next update!
konekoxsasaki chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
Kyaaaaaaaaaaas! Where did that come from? I don't care... He proposed! If she says no, I will hurt you btw XD

Loved it!
ptarn chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
Yeah, that's the Doctor for ya, alright. In the middle of a life-and-death-situation, reunited with his loved one and then asking her to marry him. He really needs to brush off his 'this is not the time or place to ask such a thing'-skills.

Oh, and before I forget: JORON MUST DIE! ;-)
thelastsock chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
Love it! A totally awesome cliffhanger :P
SenatorSolo chapter 18 . 2/22/2011
Sigh-i love marriage proposals that are completely unexpected. Another wonderful chapter-I'm very excited to see the Doctor and Rose kick Joron's butt (and soon, I hope). Way to go!
NoruheilArius chapter 17 . 2/21/2011
Your story is completely different from any story I've read, and I completely love it! I'm hooked- totally. Keep up the good work, I look forward to updates!

Ayjah chapter 17 . 2/21/2011
So HATE him !
MayFairy chapter 17 . 2/20/2011
cool chapter! bring the doctor back!

and it's not so much that i dislike joron as dislike what he is doing. as a character i quite like him.
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