Love this chapter and the the TARDIS. And the ending is just perfect

wait, wait! WHAT! no "next" button? Arggghhhh! This is become additively brilliant... Please update soon!

What a great solution to not having the Tardis... er the ORIGINAL Tardis!

Oh that has to be one of the most brilliant twists ever!

I did not even see that coming...the TARDIS...hope that the Doctor and Rose continue on the path to being together and the TARDIS does not delay or stop it.

So they don't have to wait for five years to return to the stars. Oh that's just brilliant. I would never have thought of that. That is fantastic and I'm still jealous of Rose but I think I can keep my jealousy under control. I love this story. I absolutely love this story.

Oh and thanks for the well wishes, I'm still feeling groggy and my throat hurts from the intibation but other than that I'm fine for the most part. I mean, I've been spending far too much time in bed and I lack the focus to read too many stories and there have been a lot of updates lately... anyways, my train of thought keeps slipping.

I've gotta go now. Brilliant story. Update soon,

-Kelly

that's a really good idea with the TARDIS and screwdriver from the other universe! this is definitely going to be good.

oh adorable! i love it! im so glad they got the TARDIS. you write the Doctor so well, keep it up!

A wonderful chapter... The doctor and Rose, just as it should be XD thank you for making my day

Poor Doctor... he's going to start getting desperate soon :)-

YAY TARDIS! Great, great, great way of incorporating that bit of canon in. Favorite part:

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He grinned manically. “Oh, yes! Think of it as a sort of heart transplant. And since she’ll take her first breath, so to speak, from this universe, she’ll be able to travel here without the different kind of energy being a problem.”

“I don’t believe it,” Rose whispered in amazement. “So instead of taking years, we can be back traveling in a matter of…”

“A week at the most,” he supplied joyously.

She then threw her arms around him and he lifted her off her feet and spun them around until they were both dizzy and laughing ecstatically.

“Oh, Rose,” he began once he’d set her back down, “do you realize what this means?” His face broke into a wide grin. “We don’t have to go shopping!”

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LOL! about the shopping bit.

Wow... Is it alright if I'm just a tini bit jealous of Rose right now? Wonderfully written. I can't wait to see what else you have in store.

I'm sorry I'm not in my usual rambling mood today but I had a little medical procedure done this morning and I'm a bit wiped out from the anethisia still.

Anyways, update again soon,

-Kelly

cute and lots of kissing! yay. good amount of detail too, not too much not too little.

there is something lovely about the dr without all his preconceived notions when it comes to being with Rose :)

Holy shit. That was steamy.

GIVE ME MORE.

Okay bye.

he was going to be quite bold in this relationship...oh bring it on...can't wait.