ooh sexy! i love it!

Wow...that was some self control they exerted, but wise, I'm sure. Just will make it all the better in the end.

Favorite section:

This time it wasn't a kiss before dying or Rose's mind taken over by someone else or a helmet getting in the way or a moment that ended all too soon. This was simply him loving her and her loving him, just as it was always meant to be.

:) ;) :)

I absolutely love the idea that the meta-crisis is really the Doctor from the future. It's reallly original, and brilliant. And awesome. ;)

I love this! Such an epic way to bring the Doctor back to Rose :D I especially love Rose's house, so awesome :D

Oh his raging hormones are making me smile. Seriously ever since I started seriously watching Doctor Who and really getting into it, there isn't much about the Doctor that doesn make me smile. You are doing such a wonderful job of writing.

This Joron fellow sounds like he could be trouble. It wasn't just the Doctor who got a little protective when she said he must not be used to taking no for an answer. Trust me, that guy has sprouted a bunch of scenarios in my head that are all upleasant.

Wonderful job with this chapter. All the sweet Doctor/Rose moments are making me grin from ear to ear. I'm sorry I'm not in the mood to babble like an idiot right now but I must bring this to a close rather quickly as I would like to attempt to write some Doctor Who fanfiction again. I haven't been having much luck. Everything I start writing turns out horrid, for lack of a better word.

Gotta go,

-Kelly

I don't like the idea of this other boy :/ I can't wait so see what you do with it next! Good chapter, as always!

I adore the home you described. Very cool. I loved the sweetness of this chapter, but my favorite line was this:

"Oh, I have got to get out of these and into something else. I know it sounds daft, but I feel like my clothes are soaked in Void stuff and it's making me itchy."

That just made me giggle.

Looking forward! Hurry hurry!

rose's house sounded really cool! and LOL it must be weird for the doctor to suddenly have those hormones, LOL.

Poor Doctor, poor Rose. Raging hormones. Chatty toddler. Too many people around...

Yet neither one was aware of just how many challenges were still to come...oh that does not sound good!

I do love how you handled the name thing. Personally I've just always assumed that he'd be John Smith and all but you had the foresight to have him stranded with psychic paper so formal documentation isn't necessary, unless anyone really goes digging that is...

And of course there are so many things now that could go wrong. A human Doctor is far too vulnerable to all sorts of horrible things that would have previously caused him to regenerate. Beatings of course will be far more affective. Oh, I fear the sorts of torture that this poor man may find himself subject to in the future.

Sorry, I'm not in my normal babbling mood because I'm attempting to do like five things at once and failing so I must finish up this one thing to get back to the other four things.

This was a wonderful chapter and I love this story very much. I might have to borrow your idea about Ten becoming ten.5 if I ever manage to write a post worthy Doctor Who story. But of course I would like your permission of course and I will give you credit in my author's notes.

I'm sorry but the other four things are very pressing and I've let myself run on for far too long already. Please update again soon. Your writing is wonderful and I love how Jacie interrupted them just as they were about to kiss... got off topic again, sorry.

I must be going now,

-Kelly

Love how you capture Rose's strength and her vulnerability. Really nicely written.

oh i love it! i really want them to kiss. i liked the bitt about hwo the doctor liked the blue car.

ooh that almost kiss! jackie would open the door. way to go-another brilliant chapter :)

two words... love it!