|Reviews for Red Samurai Part 1|
| Scarlotte O'Hara chapter 2 . 5/4/2013
sigh a cornered bya. how i love your ren/bya stories, hell all your stories. really like the plot here, i always wondered about renji for someone whose not noble he sure is accomplished hmmm
| snowflowersister of toshiro241 chapter 16 . 3/13/2013
okay i can understand how those two young ones misunderstood the whole thing. lol
| snowflowersister of toshiro241 chapter 14 . 3/13/2013
man i have a hard time seeing kazuki. you should draw him or have someone draw for you, akabuke , tetsuya, tama, and katsuro too!
| MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Wow I thought he would faint
| DMK chapter 28 . 11/29/2012
Cuteness! You go Aka! Get you some of that Kuchiki!
| Mina Kye chapter 28 . 11/26/2012
OOH! I like this! :D Heehee, it's nice to see this is interesting and more humorous than when Bya and Renji went into the illusion. x)
More soon please! :)
| Firebirdever chapter 27 . 11/25/2012
so lovely for the begining, cant wait to see the two lover turn around each other. Akabuke have such a big personality, that gonna be very interesting to see him conquer the kuchiki
| DMK chapter 27 . 11/24/2012
When you have the time and aren't slaving away at your keyboard and giving in to the whims of your insomniatic muse, you should think about doing a full prequel for these two! Their adventures sound like they would be very entertaining! Also, you should do a full story with Tetsuya and his Samurai! I actually like Tetsuya with Katsuro the most, there is just something about their dynamic that I love. But only think about it when your well rested and don’t have so much on your plate. Sleep is a good thing! Hugs!
| Lochness Nessie chapter 26 . 7/24/2012
This story was so amazing. 3 I loved the progression of Bya's love for Renji..and I of course loved that Renji had a parent in this story, and that he was a perv, too! The scenes with Renji as a big kitty were so cute, kitty kisses! You're simply amazing with the ByaRen pairing... I worship you. :D
| Niji Hitomi Kabra chapter 26 . 7/7/2012
Lovely! I cherish this story for two reasons: 1. this was the very first Bleach fanfiction I ever read, as such it made me fall in love with the idea of Bya/Ren, which triggered the other parings I ship. 2. this re-awakened my love of mpreg, which has laid dormant under foolish things like logic since my obsession with Harry Potter over ten years ago. So, thank you Spunky, for writing such a touching and wonderful story. If I have to critique anything it would be the description of time. The way things are laid out make the pregnancies seem rushed. On one hand I was picturing the events occurring over a handful of weeks, but then suddenly at the end Bya's baby is capable of surviving outside the womb? It threw me for a loop, especially when in the next chapter you discuss Renji suffering from the more common symptoms of late pregnancy. Everything else is well-developed and flows smoothly from plot point to plot point. The characters are engaging and realistic. The background and flash backs are informative enough to not distract from the main plot. The twist at the end with the demon was unexpected and enjoyable. I would have liked some more teasing from him sprinkled throughout the story, as I can't help but be sadistically pleased by tormenting one of my favorite couples, but the connection and the way he revealed himself was well planned. All in all, a wonderful story. Again thank you for doing what you do, and please, continue doing it.
| Gh0st R1d3r chapter 26 . 6/5/2012
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!
| Firebirdever chapter 26 . 5/1/2012
it was a so cute and good ending, i was just cant help myself and read it all along during my class.
cant for to read the sequel, i, too, love story with Renji is distress lol, this gonna be fun.
| BunnyHopster26 chapter 26 . 5/1/2012
Over all ready? Ohyes I sense a sequel you sneaky fox you :)
Awww Renji's such a hormonal pregnant shinigami...I mean SAMURAI lol. OOO Katsuro and Tetsuya?
I LOVE IT. Tetsuya is just like Byakuya, fiesty, fiery, and just too damned sexy for his CAT lol. But he does fall a bit more easily than Byakuya, which is awesome. Lols
Okay sequel reviewing time! POOF
| BunnyHopster26 chapter 25 . 5/1/2012
Lmao Katsuro and these Kuchikis!Seriously I knew what was coming after I read these lines "The healer paused for a moment, his handsome, youthful face betraying uncertainty.
"I am Lord Byakuya's cousin," he answered finally, "I was sent to assist with his healing while he is here, but I am also assisting others in the healing center. It was felt that you were more in need of my healing abilities than Lord Byakuya, so I was assigned to care for you."
"Ah...and do you...have a name, Kuchiki cousin?" Katsuro asked sleepily."
Yep...I knew it. Lol can't wait to see how that turns out!
Woohoo Renji saved Byakuya! *jams, jumps up and down, spins around, kicks, does a split*
And I love Kazuki and Akabuke they're just like Bya and Renji...but older... so cute. I wonder if they'll have another baby...or two... :))))) but we shall SEEEEEEEEEE
and Yay the king named the pretty baby! Katsumi! adorable!
| BunnyHopster26 chapter 24 . 5/1/2012
YAY! Kazuki and Akabuke are alive! and I'm pretty sure Katsuro will be fine( lol cuz i totally read each update as they came just didn't review)
Yay Byakuya's in labor! He may not look it, but somebody is full term. We know what that means...BABY TIME! YAY! *jumps around, spins, does backflips, etc*
Lol Byakuya's funny when he's in labor, told them to give renji the anesthesia instead of him, hahaha