|Reviews for The True Distortion|
| a heart full of love chapter 55 . 12/22/2011
i hope your ok from your almost accident. i loved this story. i read your les miserables fanfic and i loved it. your creativity is amazing. loook foreward to reading more. keep posting,
ps. i think you did great with erik. that is exactly for i pictured him:)
| fornowanonymous chapter 5 . 12/20/2011
I am truly enjoying your story thus far and I plan to continue until the end. So many compliments to you. However, I have a comment about Christine's age. For the 2004 film, Emmy Rossum was very young.. only 18 if I remember correctly. However, I believe Christine is supposed to be in her 20's.. early to mid. No major concern at all, and its your story and perspective so age can be manipulated at your will. And judging from your concern at the bottom of ch. 1, don't worry, its all flowing together very nicely. :) The age comment was meant only as a question of comfort.. a teenager and an almost 40 year old man is surprisingly a lot more uncomfortable than a 20 something year old and an almost 40 year old. Those few years make an oddly great difference. Thank you.
| to lazy to login chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
i'd just like to point out that in chapter 2, you say that Gustave Daae was Danish. He's actually Swedish.
| Karok1623 chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Will you continues this ? Because I love this story very much.
| Marina Bluethorn chapter 54 . 11/1/2011
I apologize if my comment caused offence, that was not intentional.
I tried my best to be friendly, since I do like this story, I only wanted to point out some constructive criticisms to improve the fiction.
I'd love it if you could point out these "riddles of incorrect grammar and punctuation."
Anyway. Apparently you are either too sensitive or too immature to receive criticisms, so I will stop commenting. I will, however, continue to read this fan-fiction, since I think it is a good story, and you are a good author.
Have a nice day.
| LadyCavalier chapter 55 . 10/29/2011
Whoa. O.O Near death experience. Just...whoa. *to sky* Hey! I need this story you know! Would you at LEAST have the courtesy to hold off-*THUNDER* ...yeah...well... just tell that guardian angel thanks...
Ah...-u- the first fanfic I ever read. I guess I've matured a lot since then, but at least this story's style hasn't changed but for the better! u It's still in my top fav's. It's so beautiful. I love your writing style.
| HorseyWitchOfTorchwood chapter 55 . 10/19/2011
I just read the whole thing and it's briiliant. But Roual turned into such an arsehole. And bloody hell, he's managed to make up for not being Gustave's father. Poor Meg
| Fairyteyla chapter 55 . 10/18/2011
I'm glad you are alive! The fate is a very strange thing...
Thank for your update. I love how Erik bounds a link with his son. It's so cute.
And it's a good idea that Meg and Jane become friends. Keep up this wonderful work!
| belleange48 chapter 55 . 10/17/2011
Glad you are alright. Thank you for the update. I love both your stories.
| funnygirl00 chapter 55 . 10/16/2011
I'm glad you're all right, God is always watching out for us. I'm also glad you updated, I like this story.
| Kaen Okami chapter 55 . 10/16/2011
Kaen: Yay, True Distortion update! *dance dance celebration*
Luc: *grin* I knew Gustave would take well to his father. Erik's going to be so happy with him...
Kaen: And Meg is pregnant! Uh...Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
Luc: Well, now you owe me ten dollars, pay up.
Kaen: Dammit! I was hoping you'd forget about that... *gives him the money*
Luc: *laughs* Come now, Kaen, do really think I'd lose track of that? Speaking of things like that, I have only one tiny criticism to make here -
Kaen: *raises katana* Be nice, Luc.
Luc: Calm down, calm down. I've just noticed that the spelling of Isobel's name differs from chapter to chapter. First Isabelle, then Isobel - Which is it? It just confused me a bit.
Kaen: All right then. And about that A/N...Wow. Just...wow. Thank God you survived!
Luc: Not many would be so lucky...Truly another case of a miracle in the lives of everyday people.
Kaen: On that note, Luc and I will go. Looking forward to seeing how our new parents handle Gustave!
| letthesongtakeflight chapter 55 . 10/16/2011
Yay! Erik is so cute when he's a father... and the dialogue between him and Christine played out really well.
Thank GOD you didn't die! I've always wondered what would happen if someone I knew from the Internet died; would I know what happened to them? Okay probably not a good thing to mention right now. But thank you for telling us this! :]
| PrimaDonna24601 chapter 55 . 10/16/2011
So glad you're alright! That had to be scary. Anyways, great chapter! I'm so glad Erik finally held Gustave. Update soon! Would also love to have another update of After the Curtain Falls and the Fire Consumes!
| RentFan27 chapter 55 . 10/16/2011
| TheAustralianZombie chapter 55 . 10/16/2011
Yay finally a new chapter! Poor Meg, I hope things get better for her in the end. I doubt Madame Giry will be... Understanding, though. Please update soon, and glad you survived!