|Reviews for Chaotic Dynamics|
| givemesomevamp chapter 30 . 2/4/2012
Oh snap! So...vamps going public? Guess I'll have to wait for you to finish the new fic to find out.
You mentioned being burned out in your A/N this chap, and I totally unnderstand that feeling, but I'm SO glad you took the time to write this fic. It's amazing! And I'm sure the next installment will be as well.
Thanks again for the great read! And much love to your hard working beta for the hours and love she invested too. SO worth it!
| givemesomevamp chapter 29 . 2/4/2012
Well...this was a nice coming off of the last. Actually, I pretty much love everything about this chap. I appreciate the fact that you don't feel the need to fill in every single detail, or stay in chronological order. This was a sweet way for them to reconnect and wind down this story, but I'm sad to see it end.
Only the Epi left...
| givemesomevamp chapter 27 . 2/4/2012
| givemesomevamp chapter 25 . 2/4/2012
"Good Lord!" She sighed. "I swear, it doesn't matter what the species, men only ever think about food and sex. Look!" She flipped the phone open and pushed a button. The phone came to life with a soft 'ping' that would have been almost unnoticeable to human ears. #trufax
And then there's this gem!
"Let's hope it doesn't involve shit that can blow us up," Peter muttered. "I'm sort of partial to being in one piece. I don't want to be turned to ashes any time soon. And I sure as hell don't want it to be at the hands of some damn blood bag. It's downright insulting!"
The thing with the RPG was brillant, as well as the cameras. Much harder to keep secrets in this age of technology, and I'm thrilled you incorporated that into this fic!
Can't wait to see what happens! And luckily, I don't have to:-)
BTW- Once again, SOOOOOOOOO damn happah I waited till this was complete, cuz yeah. I would've been all up in your inbox wanting to know what happens next. #moretrufax
| givemesomevamp chapter 24 . 2/4/2012
No one creates OCs that come to life quite as well as you, I must say. And I don't even like original characters on the whole. Well, after your werewolf from Running and now Natan, maybe I should just start judging on a case by case basis...
And now I'm rambling.
Back to the chap! I don't know exactly how to take Natan but he certainly catches on quickly.
And your Maria is a crazy bitch, but I'd expect nothing less.
Thanks for the great chap! Only six more to go!
P.S. I'm now positive there will be no sleep tonight. Also, I'm positive this story is SO worth it!
| givemesomevamp chapter 23 . 2/4/2012
"Not that Jasper would be able to eat them all. But he had a feeling his old comrade-in-arms was going to be willing to give it the old college try." My favorite line from this fucked up-but-awesome chapter.
Even without describing whatever was in that smaller building, I shivered. Just from their reactions to it.
Char was great! I like that she has balls, but knows when to shut up. I also like that she's a tough woman without being crude.
Poor Jasper! Hope guilt doesn't eat him up. He did have brain and blood on his face and then in his mouth - TWICE. He's only a vampire after all...
Imagining the look on his face when he sneezed was priceless! That was a stroke of genius.
| givemesomevamp chapter 22 . 2/4/2012
And the plot thickens...
| givemesomevamp chapter 21 . 2/4/2012
Bella's encased in concrete? I can always count on you to be upredictable, going where no Twific writer has gone before and all that jazz.
So, who's the talented one, hmmmm? Dreadlocks or Natan? I'm assuming it's not the hot, stupid guys. Though, you know what they say about assuming...
Jasper's plan to start killing and not stop till he has his mate is WIN! But I like that he's still being smart about it, not rushing straight to her and leaving vamps behind him. It's nice to see some of that military experience show itself in a time of crisis.
| givemesomevamp chapter 19 . 2/4/2012
Oh! He'd been so damn sure of himself that he missed something! Something BIG!
Yet again, I'm glad I can just click the next button. Although, I'm not sure I'll feel the same tomorrow a.m.
Much thanks to you and your beta for the fab chapter!
| givemesomevamp chapter 17 . 2/4/2012
She's going to do something foolish, isn't she?
| givemesomevamp chapter 16 . 2/4/2012
Awww. I feel like I just witnessed the lose of innocence - like a small child just found out Santa isn't real. Poor Bella! and poor Jasper and Carlisle!
But thank you, as the author, for not leading her on a human unrealistic human-freeing mission. Not that I don't want them freed, but it's just not plausible. Plus, I'm not really sure it'd be a favor at this point.
I hope this chap makes a small turning point for Char and Bella. I'd like to see them form some kinda friendship.
| givemesomevamp chapter 15 . 2/4/2012
Sneaky Alice...I had a feeling that's what that call was about.
And Bella took the news about the mating imperitive better than I expected, but I'm glad. after all, Prius aren't going to defile themselves.
anxious to hear what happened with Maria. Who needs sleep anyway? *scampers off to next chap*
| givemesomevamp chapter 13 . 2/4/2012
I knew it was them! YAY! I really like your portrayal of them. Especially Peter being a bit...behind the times. It's how I imagine nomads would be.
And now I almost wish Bella wouldn't have agreed so I could see what Jasper would do. I'm assuming from the snippet of their convo that Pete was encouraging him to lay the smacketh down.
As always, FAB chappie! Thanks to you and your beta with the awesome rack;-)
| givemesomevamp chapter 12 . 2/4/2012
It's Peter and Char, right?
"Natural gas and aging pipes - every vampire's friend." Lines like this Reasons I FLOVE you for 300, Alex. Seriously, you point out all of the plotholes SM ignored or would have if she'd written this (technology being only one such gaping hole) and fill it in easily, applying common sense to a vamp story. J'adore!
"...and I really wouldn't expect to hear from them anytime soon. I think they're busy trying to re-build their castle or find a new one to move in to. And things like that take time now, not like the old days where you could just slaughter your neighbor and move in to their home. Anyway, back to your problem… You're going to meet with her tonight?" Ahhh, he good olde days. *snort*
| givemesomevamp chapter 10 . 2/3/2012
LOL at the vamp therapy. And Jasper definitely deserved the bite. *nodslot* although it seems it was a trying day for both of them.
Did I mention I'm slightly horrified at the whole tongue-removal thing from a couple chaps back?Pretty sure I didn't but, yeah. Horrified.
Must. Keep. Reading.