Reviews for Officer Needs Assistance
cheekymice chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Love it FB!

Outstanding line...

The suspect stares wickedly at Cooper and sucks his teeth.

" Man, kiss my ass."

" No thanks," Cooper smirks." But when you get to County, if you ask real nice, I'm sure one of the homies will do that for you."

You have everyone so spot on it's frightening and yup, it does indeed read like an episode of SouthLAnd.

So, when do we get more SouthLAnd fic from you, my Sweet? :)

Cheeks

xx
LilahMorgann chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I think you did a really good job of capturing the style of the show. My only complaint is that maybe make John a little less mad at Chickie. She is his friend, and the only reason why he is treating her like this is because he knows the amazing cop she is. He does not want her to lose out on the thing she loves. He just can't say this like a normal person :)