Reviews for Rewritten
BloopdeDoop chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Lovely story. This is how I like to imagine Remus and Sirius after the war.
imSiriuslyLupin4you chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
I truly enjoyed this. I think I even cried a little.
Ophelia chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
This story was so SAD! I've been bawling lika crazy... But it was really good.
neonorne chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I like this, both the idea and the execution of it. You write Sirius as a very believable adult, softened and matured by both war and parenthood. The relationship between him and Harry and him and adult Remus were both very sweet without being sentimental. And the scene at Godric's Hollow was very touching.

Remus a writer? Yeah, I can believe that! But Sirius a bartender was a bit surprising!

My only problem was Remus turning tail and leaving the war before it was won - I thought that was not very well explained. Was it personal, because of his (unrequited) relationship with Sirius? If it was, it was kind of disappointing. I think Sirius as we know him would have found it hard to forgive that - in his book it would have been equal to desertion - cowardly and close to treason... So I thought this would have needed some working through in the story - a real hurdle for the two of them to get over, before their relationship could start again.

But this was my only problem with an otherwise beautiful story...
Chale chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
I like this one a lot though :) it's very cute and believable. It broke my heart when Harry called Sirius 'daddy' but I still loved the Sirius/Remus. They so belong together
youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
I wish this happened instead of Azkaban and Beyond-the-Veil! and all that... Gah, very touching.
heytheremeranda chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
That was so so good. Oh my goodness. I just- wow. I loved it.

I would love to read more *hint hint* about how their relationship goes from that point and the two of them raising Harry. Just a suggestion though!
Lizzy0308 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Wow. I loved this story. Oh my goodness. It is beautiful. So so beautiful. Thanks for posting this. I wish there were more. You know how they rebuild their lives. Really tho it is so great
TemperedRose chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
AAAAW! that's the sweetest thing. it's so heart warming! especially the ending!