|Reviews for Secret Steps|
| Percabeth Trumps Jasper chapter 16 . 12/27/2013
This story is Amazing! You need to update soon!
| angstbunny chapter 16 . 9/14/2013
Wonderful! I love the way you have gathered Harry and Ron into the Order along with Hermione. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/9/2013
very sweet ending of the chapter
"Your youthful optimism is far more remarkable than anything I've done," he said.
But a sliver of tension had left him, and Severus reluctantly felt more hopeful than he had in some time.
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/9/2013
this is one of the best stories i have been reading. Number of reviews are just too low! Thank you!
| Lost-puppyEYES chapter 16 . 9/9/2013
i want someone to punch Harry in the face, and then give him a cake. dammit.
| ousia chapter 16 . 9/8/2013
Definitely love it :-) I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up. And try to turn up the heat around Snape and Hermione, will you? :-P Great story!
| Luna de Papel chapter 16 . 9/8/2013
Grief can enable people to say the most hurtful things to another. I'm afraid Harry's reaction is one I've seen before.
At least the remaining orphans are safe and the Order is being shaken into taking action. I look forward to seeing Ron offer his best ability to the cause.
(And I wonder, like Severus, how did Harry know it was imperative to move?)
| Ybs chapter 16 . 9/8/2013
Thou dost live! Ha ha, a great chapter! I always look forward to reading new chapters of this story. I just think that the whole idea is so novel and original!
I also like your portrayal of Snape. I think it's what he would have been like if he hadn't joined the Death Eaters and hadn't allowed the bitterness of his rivalry with the Marauders to cloud his judgement even so later in life. Still taciturn and snarky, but without the real hatred that he has in canon. So good job on that! It's such a pity that he could have been the better man in canon but allowed his bitterness to eat him up.
As always, looking forward to the next chapter!
| Luna de Papel chapter 15 . 8/27/2013
Poor Harry, what a horrible way to be proven right. And to think that in such a short time since his plea to relocate his mother they had made such important headway towards making Grimmauld Place their refuge.
| Luna de Papel chapter 10 . 8/27/2013
I much prefer Severus as the Order's leader, but Fawkes' presence makes me wonder about Dumbledore’s role in all this.
And Severus is back being a Snape :)
| Luna de Papel chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
"The minister was nothing but a blind, old fool who was led by his lower brain."
I wondered who that could be, but finding out was better than I could have imagined.
Of course if that ship sailed, Grindelwald would be the one pulling the strings in that relationship :D
| Luna de Papel chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
I think your most engaging AU just swallowed me in... :)
| MM chapter 15 . 8/25/2013
Wow - a dramatic and traumatic update. Poor Harry - his fears were well founded.
| notyetanotheralias chapter 15 . 8/23/2013
i dont trust dumbledore one bit!
| tambrathegreat chapter 15 . 8/23/2013
Amazing story. Thanks for sharing it with us all.