|Reviews for Lullaby|
| arsina3 chapter 6 . 8/4/2012
How come and you haven't finished this story? it's verry well written! i would really like to reed the end of it!
| Angeltales321 chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Great story so far, I had no clue Bella would have been on a child's programme in this story. Please update!
| mommymac0508 chapter 6 . 7/29/2012
Oh my poor Bella but what made her this way update soon
| chloey24 chapter 6 . 7/3/2012
I started with Wisp, jumped to ACAP, then found this. These stories are really well written and I have enjoyed them immensely. The quote? Its from Spartacus.
| DrawnToTheNight chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
I really like your story
i can't wait to get to know bella more
you have such a good writing style as well, I normal hate story written in 3rd person but your one really hocked me.
thank you for writing
| gilo chapter 6 . 6/9/2012
i like it esecially this hardened wall bella has... very interesting.
i love the belt loop thing, very creative, and quite real :)
| Angeldolphin01 chapter 6 . 4/21/2012
I love the story so far. Please update soon.
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 6 . 3/23/2012
This looks neat! I like your Peter character, and the initial interactions she and Edward have had. Thanks for writing!
| divyvicki chapter 6 . 3/20/2012
I started this because I thought it was a companion piece to "As Children After Play". I really like it and was wondering since u recently updated ACAP if u would be updating this one as well.
| divyvicki chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Interesting start to this story. Looking forward to reading about Isabella's dark past.
| dazzledpixie88 chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
Well this is an interesting twist on twilight. It intrigues me though and now I'm curious to find out more about Bella's past. Hopefully you decide to continue this story.
| Ajunebuga chapter 6 . 3/8/2012
I legit used to love lady lovely locks. I even wore those weird squirrel barrettes with the long colored hair tails in my hair.
Also, thank you SO much for your wonderful reviews, will pm you later :)
| nessa01 chapter 6 . 2/23/2012
Wow cant wait for the next chapter!
Renee messed her up pretty good by the sounds of things
| Hannah chapter 6 . 12/30/2011
I just stumbled on this story and I am insanely intrigued about where this is going. Your writing is really fantastic. I hope you update more soon! :)
| KenzieOnMain chapter 6 . 11/6/2011
A story that actually makes character development a point as much as a feature is something I find rare enough to celebrate.. This is the first story of yours that I've read and I have absolutely been sucked in. I must confess that I'm wary about the pacing though chapter 6 seemed like it could be a transition to flash forward to the fix Bella project and while other readers have expressed their desire to see Bella quickly 'Stepford' Wife/Daughter/Sister into a vampire Brady bunch I would really like to be able to savor the background you've crafted and watch how your Bella lives to better contrast and experience her future growth.
I confess to being annoyed with Esme (And hoping Bella shares my annoyance), she can't pretend to only have the best intentions when she pushes Bella into a confrontation with a therapist to 'fix' her when she's barely settled into her new life in a new house in a new state with new guardians. She claimed to want to make her transition as easy as possible and yet it seems more like Bella is her new project. Usually Alice is the one forcing a Bella Barbie situation, I'm surprised Esme would disregard any attempts at comfort or creating the illusion of security only days upon them meeting- Its like the worst hybrid of WannaMamma and Bored Housewife... I find it a fascinatingly unique take on Esme's characterization (as based on these actions). The potential conflict I see that Bella is not a little kid she can crack and remold on a whim no matter how much Esme or Alice may feel able and entitled to..
You've created such a good foundation for her that I hope to see Bella Swan in action more before she becomes Bella Cullen. Someone as independent as your Bella wouldn't jump at being someone's pet project and wary of strangers looking to dictate what she should want or do. A shrink looking to write a book on people like her- that kind of thing would rankle. Having a short term foster mom toss a therapist at me when I'd barely gotten my foot in the door (of a place I know is only temporary) would be more of a deal breaker than anything. Help can become intrusion and condescension when its unsolicited or forced even if its allegedly your choice to talk back. A 16 year old who was forced to self-sufficiency shouldn't be quick to accept a kid role... Bella's trust can't be so easily earned, as far as she's concerned shouldn't the Cullens be more of a pit stop instead on the way to Charlie or her dream of emancipation? After being burned so many times by family and strangers it would undermine her struggles if she set out a proverbial welcome mat (much less accept said strangers coming into your room at night no matter how sincere they look or attractive they are.
Wow I've rambled, clearly I'm hooked.. it's just so rare for me to want more journey and a less quick arrival to the destination.. I'll call it the scenic route. I'm eager to watch this story unfold and hope your muse is willing to stick around for a meaningful story development rather than a switch flip.. with what I've read so far it would be a shame not to have the chance to see your work continue with the level of detail and nuance that you've shown so far.