Reviews for Night Mare's Fushigi Yuugi
W-Rabbit chapter 59 . 3/18/2010
yeay! Another chapter! I really missed the story so much! I hope you update soon!
MercuryCrush chapter 56 . 7/13/2008
this chapter was so sad! i got all teary eyed it was so sad:
lola123 chapter 55 . 6/12/2008
i just realized that thoughts sound stupider in print...

yes, I'm sorry that my previous reviews were so dumb. now the whole

damn fan fiction world sees my stupidity. and my life sulks. I wanna kill myself...

good story! update soon!

p.s. mail me!
luciana-bell chapter 53 . 5/1/2008
very good! wasn't expecting you to update but...bravo.

nice chappy!
LandraBlaze chapter 46 . 4/30/2008
I LOVED it! I -could- -not- -stop- -laughing-!

Really, I had to turn away from the screen a few times, and even choked once. Nii- I LOVE your stories!
lola123 chapter 52 . 1/4/2008
more more more more more...

look,my exams are gonna start on the 11 of jan...

instead of studing,im sitting here waiting 4 you.

my future doesnt look that bright to me right now...

IM ADDICTED TO YOUR STORY!please have mercy on my soul and start typing...

if my parents find out about this,I WILL BE SC*D...

PLEASE WRITE THIS BLESSED STORY!and email me at

BY THE WAY...I BELONG TO A DIFFERENT COUNTRY!

ANSWER MY QUESTIONS...plz...*begs on knees*plz and give me your address if possible...*sniffs*

plz nightmare do it 4 us all!

atleast tell me when you plan on updating.

im begging here...
lola123 chapter 52 . 1/4/2008
plz write...im dying...plz write

i lovr nakago though...and sharon too...is tere a posibility of a pairing betwwen them...i hope thats wat ppl want...im waiting...when do you plan to update?

email me sometime...yeah like your gonna!

i come here everyday hoping 4 an update...i love ann too...is sharon tall?plz answer my questions...
luciana-bell chapter 52 . 1/2/2008
i love you for writing that...plz write more,and a little more bout seiryuu...plz write more soon...add somthin bout soi...

i loved it im waiting anxiously...
kitsunephoenix chapter 15 . 1/1/2008
Now, I like your mirror reflection person. She has some good quips. Well, not like exactly.. You know what I mean. She's evil but you appriciate the character from a writer's perspective.. Yeah, gonna stop rambling now..

I know what's going to happen, yet I find myself reliving the emotions of the story for the first time, plus that extra uncertainty that comes with the fact that there's another character and I don't know what you're going to do with her. I feel certain that if you retell certain parts of the story as they were but with your own twist as you are doing, then I know I'll laugh and cry as I did when reading the original story.

The scene with Sharon in the river of light is beautifully told with fantastic imagery. Everyone's voices reaching her is a wonderful idea. And the conversation with her conscience is the perfect mix of humour anbd seriousness (if that's even a word..)

The first meeting with Suzaku. Hmm, interesting...
kitsunephoenix chapter 14 . 1/1/2008
Hi hi .

So I decided to review more.. Sue me. I know you authors like getting reviews, 'cause I do too.

Oh, just a word of slight concrit before I get onto the hyperism of this review.. You might wanna go over your comma use a little, though I understand I hate the little devils. And sometimes you use 'to' when 'too' would have been better.

Example: "The fire had become to hot"

Considering the length of the story the fact I only have two points is awsome .

The seishi playing poker -giggle- I wanna play! Aww, the seishi are gonna be so confused by the monopoly thing. Bwah! Figures Hori-kun would win ya know..

Hokay.. Is this story gonan have worse love-complications than the original? 'Cause I drew that out once.. Whew it was complicated.. And now with TWO girls from the other world, not to mention Seiryuu no Miko... (who I'm fairly sure is gonna be Amanda but I'm still deliberating...)

-giggle- Devious Korin. When I first read the title to this chapter I burst out laughing and went "finally!" :D

Well Sharon, be thankful it hasn't happened to you as many times as it happened to Miaka XD

Oh, fight with Nuriko.. That's gotta hurt. Bwahaha! Much better way to reveal Nuriko's a man! Well done.

“It's not every day you get to play naked tug of war.” THAT is the quote of the century! Oh dear lord I laughed so hard at that.

Kya! Oh, poor poor seishi for having to deal with the madness of two teenage girls from the modern world..

Wah! Sharon annoyed Taiitsu-kun! Not good...

Ooh, no Noit good at all. Damn damn and double damn. Sharon is definately insecure.. But the others need to try and help her. Bah.

Eheheh, guess you'll have to get used to my rambles, ne?
kitsunephoenix chapter 13 . 1/1/2008
Ok, got this far and had to review. Umm, I dunno if there'll be any other chapter reviews but it's more than likely if something I love happens.

Story in general:

Wow. I admire you for your ability to write OCs. Sharon is kinda Miakaish.. But waay better. I love her. Of course I relate more to Ann but what the heck. I feel really sorry for Sharon and her screw-ups with the seishi. Nuriko needs a good smack, and I'd say the same for Hotohori but, well.. Dear lord did I laugh when it got to that point. Nuriko's and Ann's reactions were priceless. Another thing.. Foosheegee Loogee? (or however you spelt it) Utterly priceless! I swear my stomach hurts from laughing now. But, you also have the perfect balance of not-so-happy parts. I really love your story and I shall continue reading, and attempt to read it all in one night -sweatdrop- Ahem. Oh, and the relationship between Ann and Sharon is brilliant. It's a very real friendship and I love it. Jeeze when I read out the Duck! Cow! Chicken ect line.. Well lets say my brother now thinks I'm insane... Thing is... Well my friends and I had the same thing a while back, 'cept ours got to be about 15 things long... With hand actions...

This chapter:

“I wanna learn how to flip people." - Is it just me, or does this line not bode well for Tasuki's future? Or Hotohori's? -smirk- now THAT I would like to see.

I went into hysterics over the lady's reactions to Hotohori and Tamahome's half-nakedness.. Now that was brilliant. Absolutely loved it. And who wouldn't react that way? ;)

Sharon's giving Hori-kun a back rub! You know.. I keep thinking she's gonna call him whore... -sweat-

-glances at length of review- Umm.. Heheh.. Why do I leave such long reviews? Because I can.

XD Couldn't resist.

Mary
luciana-bell chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
plz write more...im dying to know wats happening next

by the way i loved it
shelbyyvonne chapter 50 . 9/22/2007
LMFAO!

I love this so much! Sorry I haven't reviewed any of the past three chapters untill now...I haven't had much time tho. LOL. Whoa that word "haven't" looks real weird to me..._

Anyways, update soon.
Blue Rose Doujinshi chapter 46 . 9/17/2007
omg...I love you for this! xD;; I love all of the chapters, but this one...wow
VP Miyu-Chan chapter 48 . 8/28/2007
Update soon...o-n-e-g-a-i-i!

lol
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