Reviews for Separation Relocation
Whitelion69 chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
This is a very good one-shot.
cytpotter chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
:) *chuckles evilly* Some Steve whump with a little Danny snark is just the recipe for a great story! ;) Great job!
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
love the way you write danny
Supernoodle chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Well that definately hit my little H/C button. I feel all kind of fuzzy inside now.

Gotta love the bitch/jerking - especially when Steve's all woozy and hurting.

You know what I really love - when Danny calls Steve Steven. It's like he's his mum or something :-)

Loved it! xxx
LisaG16 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
*snort!* that was funny!
Andrea chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Hmmmmm... maybe I should go and watch more than just the one episode of H5-0 that I've seen so far... I had decided not to, because it's on way too late on a Sunday night for me, but your stories actually make me want to see more ;-).
Del Sundance chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
Loved this! Can't wait for more. Lucky me...there is a third H50 story listed.
LiCS chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
EXCELLENT! Please write more!
star trek nutcase chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Another excellent story. I think you do manage the Steve/Danno interaction extremely well, with a large dollop of snarkiness by Danny that makes it so humorous while at the same time not going too far with Steve's machismo.
Nevany chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Awesome story.

You captured the boys and their bickering nicely.
sherry57 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
I really really liked this story. I love Steve whump followed by comfort. Thanks.

Looking forward to your next gem.
chocolatelover1 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Lol! I mean, Aww poor Steve... Lol Its hard to show sympathy when all I wanna do is laugh at Danny's remarks lol Nice job!
Duchess of Strumpetness chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
I haven't seen this series yet but it looks like fun.
ZhaLenn chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
It's so great to see you writing new stories of H50. I loved your story. Their banter was so funny, especially where Steve asked Danny to fix his shoulder :D
Xxmutant girlXx chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
this is funny.
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