Reviews for Harry Potter and the Bride Wars |
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jchangpa chapter 10 . 10/12/2018 Not sure what to think about this story, first it has some good parts, the blasé part is just an stupidity as basically it make Harry gay because men’s simple do not stop been men’s because they change gender and that basically kill the story. But what really make it bad is that it take 7 years to drop 10 chapters that if we remove the blasé parts it get reduce to 4 good ones and 2 more or less good. Good luck with, it still a bad story from my point of view. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/11/2018 Watch one punch man and then consider that boring comment again, or read Rorschach’s blots harry as Mr black, Being able to plow through villans like Homer Simpson through a donut isn’t boring if the delivery and surrounding context is right, also it saves you having to write fight scenes as they can if necessary be ended with a wondrous display of power, beside just because the hero can do it doesn’t mean he will, some times the fun is in watching the hero tryout no to exercise restraint as villans increasingly test their patience and push them to the point of actually demonstrating to the fools what real power looks like. |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/11/2018 So all that build up to climax with woe is me so I shall whine like a baby. |
Adam chapter 10 . 10/9/2018 This story needs to be finished at all costs, it is hysterical |
alaskan-dracolych chapter 10 . 10/9/2018 Nobby! Hahahahahaha...*falls off chair* |
French girl chapter 4 . 10/7/2018 Hello, I just started reading your fic and I'm enjoying it so far. Since I'm french, I thought I would offer the correct translation of the sentence you wanted to use, in case you would want to correct it, since what Google gave you doesn't mean anything. It's not just grammatically faulty, it's completely impossible to understand. So here : "Un peu, principalement par les émissions de cuisine que ma tante regardait " Now I'll just go read the next chapter. Tanks for the entertainment :) |
Dudtheman chapter 10 . 10/9/2018 such a AWESOME fun story to read thank you |
lonewolf 83 chapter 9 . 10/8/2018 i like it. enjoy your writing and good health |
ClaireR89 chapter 10 . 10/8/2018 Story was ok kinda got jumbled with all the omakes and I know this was humor but it's more parody than anything. |
F Lefebvre chapter 3 . 10/6/2018 that part with the expos almost made me die! We tend to forget 4th year takes place in 1994 but that reference just made my day as an Expo fan (former) thank you |
ClaireR89 chapter 9 . 10/8/2018 You should put all the omakes in a separate "story" or what not. Not a huge issue but this story could probably use a once over. Maybe just my brain tonight but it seems to jump around a bit much |
ClaireR89 chapter 6 . 10/8/2018 So this isn't a real chapter? |
Mawsel chapter 10 . 10/8/2018 Have only just found this gem. Have had to stop from time to time to wipe the tears of laughter away. Please don't give up. |
Ranmaleopard chapter 10 . 10/8/2018 This is just really interesting and I can't wait for more. I'm assuming that the dragon turned human is somehow going to get married to Harry. Please continue |
ncpfan chapter 10 . 10/8/2018 Good update, and welcome back on this one. The scene where Emily was giving "The Talk" that ended up turning into am international symposium was hilarious! I was a bit hacked off, though, at Flitwick's lack of righteous anger at Turner and Jackson's attempt to permanently maim one of their underclassmen. And why were they so maliciously vindictive towards Luna? I mean, this wasn't just a simple prankthey seemed angry and outright hateful towards Luna, especially if their reason was to "teach that bitch a lesson" as they put it. What was the lesson they were trying to teach? It felt like they were out for revenge, but why? Their attitudes weren't those of two girls trying to get a laugh at someone's expensethey were trying to go too far and they both knew it. Again thoughwhy? Looking forward to more, especially to seeing the aftermath of the Dragon-turned-woman! Please try to update soon |