In the sentences "fa femm teveyhdmo pa fydlrehk oui." and "we will defiantly be watching you." teveyhdmo and defiantly should be tavehedamo and definitely, respectively. "What I'm just noisy." should be "What? I'm jusy nosy.". "Took a set" should be "took a seat". Pilled should be piled. Oblivarate should be obliviate. "Might now want "should be "might not want". Consoling should be counseling.

Horacrux should be horcrux. Serverus should be Severus. Other than those glaring errors you have done fairly well. Just a few spelling and grammatical errors that are easy to ignore.

The day they get told to not make any moves he makes the biggest move yet.

Can't help but feel Harry is going to run off into the forest to cause some mayhem and get drunk with the centaurs.

Kaboom.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Interesting.

thrilled to have you back writing this fic, also hoping Lucis gets his comupance

good chapter

seems ok a bit weird,but ok so update when you can

This is great! Thanks for the update.

Wonderful. Love your writing ️ Please keep sharing

Amazing Snivvy let Harry speak. Amazing Bumbles let him speak. Amazing the girls didn't start screaming. Amazing Harry, if that powerful, hasn't incinerated Snivvy and Bumbles by now.

I couldn't stop laughing at this one, I loved it!

cool i love how you put in Terry Prachett stuff like the coffee and Nobby, i hope Nobby is a lost elf or something a halfling that be so funny