Reviews for Harry Potter and the Bride Wars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You have a good race in third chapter. They all look like contenders, but you said that there is only win, place and show available. Pretty darn good set up so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was quite the rant Harry had going there. I thought it was a bit too well put together for the spoken work though. That was an explosion of elequence that most people would not of been able to get out in a real setting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please do not let your story go down this road Gabrielle is such a non character it hurts. Fleur is an established person Gabrielle is a little girl who we see like twice. Their not even full Veela either their like quarter of half or something. It really breaks the story when your main character won't flat out tell someone no they can't impose them self on him for the rest of his life because of a crush. Gabrielle needs to be told no flat out it's not mean it's just a fact if she gets all upset either she'll get over it or she wont'. It's not even funny it's just odd. If you had changed her age it would of made sense but ugh 10 really. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved watching Lucius get destroyed by Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kudos for Neville. Maybe he can marry Susan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Ginny-so I'll submit a plea from all us Ginny-fans to please let her stay with Harry. Although it's probably too late. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to see that Ginny's got the right attitude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing Luna is the one he doesn't know very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun seeing Draco slapped down so strongly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE. I love this stuff! Is there more coming? |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i hope to see more of this story sometime soon and anything that happens to be going wrong is fixed i happen to really like this one |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved the omake :-D Thanks for the very interesting read. |