Reviews for Harry Potter and the Bride Wars
petros308 chapter 3 . 4/21/2012
You have a good race in third chapter. They all look like contenders, but you said that there is only win, place and show available. Pretty darn good set up so far
petros308 chapter 2 . 4/21/2012
That was quite the rant Harry had going there. I thought it was a bit too well put together for the spoken work though. That was an explosion of elequence that most people would not of been able to get out in a real setting
Darksnider05 chapter 8 . 4/21/2012
Please do not let your story go down this road Gabrielle is such a non character it hurts. Fleur is an established person Gabrielle is a little girl who we see like twice.

Their not even full Veela either their like quarter of half or something.

It really breaks the story when your main character won't flat out tell someone no they can't impose them self on him for the rest of his life because of a crush.

Gabrielle needs to be told no flat out it's not mean it's just a fact if she gets all upset either she'll get over it or she wont'.

It's not even funny it's just odd. If you had changed her age it would of made sense but ugh 10 really.
Reviewer of the West chapter 7 . 4/2/2012
Very nice. Please continue.
Dagda06117032 chapter 7 . 3/30/2012
Update please
DukeBrymin chapter 7 . 2/25/2012
Loved watching Lucius get destroyed by Harry.
DukeBrymin chapter 5 . 2/25/2012
Kudos for Neville. Maybe he can marry Susan.
DukeBrymin chapter 4 . 2/25/2012
I like Ginny-so I'll submit a plea from all us Ginny-fans to please let her stay with Harry. Although it's probably too late.
DukeBrymin chapter 3 . 2/25/2012
Good to see that Ginny's got the right attitude.
DukeBrymin chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
I'm guessing Luna is the one he doesn't know very well.
DukeBrymin chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Fun seeing Draco slapped down so strongly.
Lieutenant Paladine chapter 7 . 2/14/2012
LOVE. I love this stuff! Is there more coming?
major wallace chapter 7 . 2/2/2012
nice
Creepingdoom710 chapter 7 . 1/26/2012
hey i hope to see more of this story sometime soon and anything that happens to be going wrong is fixed i happen to really like this one
Loatroll chapter 7 . 1/25/2012
I absolutely loved the omake :-D Thanks for the very interesting read.
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