Reviews for Smoking
nooni19 chapter 4 . 11/9/2013
I thought that this was really sweet ( :
lovesickdinosaurs chapter 4 . 5/19/2011
Great work, as always. I liked it, though if that was the end, it was a little abrupt. I can't wait to read what else you come up with!
mrytale2-5 chapter 4 . 5/8/2011
nice way of tying up the loose ends, it was an interesting story as not a style/subject that had been touched on before.
blackandblueangel chapter 4 . 5/7/2011
Great chapter
kdzl chapter 4 . 5/7/2011
Nice job. I always love your stories, I'm sad to see this one end, but it was beautiful!
crazyobsession101 chapter 4 . 5/7/2011
Great job with this! I definitely enjoyed this fic (:
smg55 chapter 4 . 5/7/2011
Or... you could continue you and make this a pair fic with someone. The way you wrote it, it could be with Emily. I'm just saying. I would like to know what happened to the Kayla and Kaitie and whatnot. Just saying, you could go on, or make a sequal.
mrytale2-5 chapter 3 . 2/11/2011
nice chapter that brought the rest of the team into the case, great portrayal of JJ, can imagine her being frustrated and wanting to do more, hope that the mother and child pull through
Swifty1212 chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
I love this story! update!
zzz-zzz84 chapter 3 . 2/8/2011
Great chapter! Really looking forward to more.
spk chapter 3 . 2/8/2011
Love the way you're writing JJ's character. Ecstatic about this update. :)
foxyfeline chapter 3 . 2/8/2011
great update. please do again really soon! lol
crazyobsession101 chapter 3 . 2/8/2011
Yay you updated! Really great chapter! I hope they find this guy soon and all would be alright - is there a chance Kayla would actually survive?
spk chapter 2 . 1/22/2011
WHOA! Definitely wasn't expecting this. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
mrytale2-5 chapter 2 . 1/19/2011
I'm glad that they all managed to get out safely, although JJ was stubborn but luckily the fireman was there to help her. Hope that the team arrive soon to take some of the stress away from her and help her solve the case. Nice chapter.
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