Reviews for Beginnings
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
Who do you think would be good as the voice of Annie, Dodgers mother?
A. Peri Gilpin
B. Jennifer Connelly
C. Kate Hudson
D. Kathy Baker
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Who do you think would be good as the voice of Diesel?
A. Patrick Duffy
B. Dylan McDermott
C. Michael Gross
D. Steve Martin
WyldClaw chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
Ha ha!
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Oh. So dodgers mum was originally part of fagins gang?
DodgerNYC chapter 5 . 6/22/2012
Very nice story. It focuses on Rita, of course (she is your favorite) and that works. I liked the ending where her family leaves her (sad, yes, but it was very well written). And I love how you leave it off at the "you know how it goes from here" aspect. Anways, great story. (Is it actually done? It kinda seemed like it, but if you write more, that would be great!)
626and624 chapter 6 . 10/31/2011
I love this story. Please post the next chapter soon
TwilightSky15 chapter 6 . 9/23/2011
cute as always plz update soon!
AshWolf Forever chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Looking good. Read all the way to ch5 and Rita was left behind. Nice work!
tharsei chapter 5 . 4/9/2011
Very good so far. You do a swell job of explaining how they (Einstein, Dodger, and Rita) get to know each other as well as the others (eventually). Please update soon. :D
Winter Midnight chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Cute :)