|Reviews for Before The Storm|
| NessaMalfoy chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
| stydias chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Awhhhhh! You are also the best pen pal some one could ask for! lol
I like this! It's really good Berna.
You only had like two mistakes:
*'He never though' - you probably forgot to add it, but there's a 't' at the end of thought.
**'It was ended, he cant hold her anymore.' - Your Grammer is a little off; 'It was over' would sound better. And since your talking in past-tense instead of 'can't' you'd put 'couldn't'.
you did great on this though! (:
Sigh. This was the first review in my three years of being on fanfiction I actually corrected something. I'm exhaused now (;
And, you've already made me a Dramione follower. sigh. (: