Reviews for The One that got Away
KimiD chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Hey there WMM found your o/s ion Fictionators and had to have a look-see. Glad I did! I really enjoyed it. Very well written and I just plain liked it! Will be checking out some of your other stories as well. KimiD
Mitchi213 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Ohhhhh my God!

That was such a beautiful story, really touching.

Finally a big broad Edward, just the way I like it... :)

Thank you for that!
Elvire23 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
I would love if you decided to continue with this story.
frlarsson chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Love your story, )

best wishes, Linda
robertnkristen chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
what a great story ! Thanks!
keyecullen chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Can I just say that I LOVE hockey? *snicker* And your hockey story?

A couple of things that struck me for some reason:

Loved this description:

stirred in the lavender light of early morning

This too:

It licked at her insides, chastising her for her willingness to throw away her hopes and dreams for some man, even though she hadn't.

But I enjoyed the entire one shot. It was really well written. It captured and completely held my description. Love your Edward and Bella!

*runs to profile page to check out other stories*

Keye
amber2310 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
This fic was awesome. I loved it. I wouldn't be opposed to you continuing it either. Bahaha. But Seriously. You should continue this. It's really good, and would be an awesome Multi-Fic. D
1853kaz chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Nothing like a little hockey stick.. Fun. Cheers! :)
MonDancr chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Loved it. Would love if you expanded it someday.
ajowen chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Now that was hot! I absoluetly loved it! Please write more, you're my hero!
Danie Carly Cullen chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Loved this story so much
brandyrenae chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
A simply delicious story! Never one to disappoint, this is why you continue to be one of my favorite authors!
Jlivest chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Dammit girl - that was HOT! And you know how much I love me some Hockeyward! LOL! I have to say though - one phrase in your story kept drawing me back to read and re-read it - over and over. Its so unique, and totally nails the whole chemistry between E&B "He'd never had a woman in his bed but he could picture Bella nowhere else." LOVE THAT! So yeah - hurry up and finish your other stories so you can put this one into play! xoxo Da Meenx!
kite strings chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
aw, at least there's a HEA
cebinc chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Loved it! Thanks for sharing it with us.

Cheryl
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