|Reviews for The One that got Away|
| KimiD chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Hey there WMM found your o/s ion Fictionators and had to have a look-see. Glad I did! I really enjoyed it. Very well written and I just plain liked it! Will be checking out some of your other stories as well. KimiD
| Mitchi213 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Ohhhhh my God!
That was such a beautiful story, really touching.
Finally a big broad Edward, just the way I like it... :)
Thank you for that!
| Elvire23 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
I would love if you decided to continue with this story.
| frlarsson chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Love your story, )
best wishes, Linda
| robertnkristen chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
what a great story ! Thanks!
| keyecullen chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Can I just say that I LOVE hockey? *snicker* And your hockey story?
A couple of things that struck me for some reason:
Loved this description:
stirred in the lavender light of early morning
It licked at her insides, chastising her for her willingness to throw away her hopes and dreams for some man, even though she hadn't.
But I enjoyed the entire one shot. It was really well written. It captured and completely held my description. Love your Edward and Bella!
*runs to profile page to check out other stories*
| amber2310 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
This fic was awesome. I loved it. I wouldn't be opposed to you continuing it either. Bahaha. But Seriously. You should continue this. It's really good, and would be an awesome Multi-Fic. D
| 1853kaz chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Nothing like a little hockey stick.. Fun. Cheers! :)
| MonDancr chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Loved it. Would love if you expanded it someday.
| ajowen chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Now that was hot! I absoluetly loved it! Please write more, you're my hero!
| Danie Carly Cullen chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Loved this story so much
| brandyrenae chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
A simply delicious story! Never one to disappoint, this is why you continue to be one of my favorite authors!
| Jlivest chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Dammit girl - that was HOT! And you know how much I love me some Hockeyward! LOL! I have to say though - one phrase in your story kept drawing me back to read and re-read it - over and over. Its so unique, and totally nails the whole chemistry between E&B "He'd never had a woman in his bed but he could picture Bella nowhere else." LOVE THAT! So yeah - hurry up and finish your other stories so you can put this one into play! xoxo Da Meenx!
| kite strings chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
aw, at least there's a HEA
| cebinc chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Loved it! Thanks for sharing it with us.