Reviews for breaking the mirror
ObnoxiousSpontaneousCombustion chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Creatively written. I can definitely imagine Victoire as being like porcelain.
sappiquesandangelfireno.71 chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
i absolutly love all of your pieces that are in this format. you write them like, like they're actually life, like they're actully rwal. i guess that's the point but this is refreshing to the point that you're very likely my fave fanfic authour!
marniemadden chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
This was great - a really different approach to Victoire and an interesting spin on her "perfection" :)
kingslayers chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I LoveLoveLove this pairing, and I must say, YOU ROCK AT IT!

Oh Vic :/
maggi chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
this is amazing! I really loved it, its very sentimental and i totally could feel what she felt! Goodjob )
JaneK26 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
I'm not a fan of this pairing but this was great! Espesially the last part!

"And he's your happily ever after

Because he's the only one to realize

And really truly care

About ho You felt

And he healed you with butterfly kisses

&long hugs

&&long walks

&&&the response 'no you're not' when you said

You were 'okay'

(you had been waiting long enough

For someone to notice)".
Skandar-Loves-Redvines chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
I think you've just won an award in the awesomesauce category.


I'll cut off my rant, though, to praise you on your fantastic writing, and congratulate you on writing a TeddyVictoire. I feel like everybody's converting to TeddyLily, so I'm grasping at all the T/V shippers I can get.

As for the freeverse, I loved your use of our line. It was really subtle, but it was used so beautifully. I especially loved that "Oh dear, you're gone!". And the "nobody wants to see perfection cry." Pretty much the whole damn thing, really.

If I was judging this, I'd crown you winner.