Reviews for Come Fly With Me
Puggle chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
Fantastic and scorching perfection
Thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
"Je suis désolée" written female genre requires an extra "e"
Satan'sPixie chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Lol, loved the French! :-)
KiLizFrosty chapter 3 . 2/26/2012
But it's not gay when it's in a 3 way. I loved it. Best 3 way I've read in a long time. You described him as something like Rupert Graves, so that's how I saw it in my mind, I kind of had to tell myself "it's not Lestrade" Very well-written. You are a master of porn, mon ami!
Lena221b chapter 2 . 2/5/2012
Hehe, nice story so far. I enjoy it a lot.

A bit of French-picking: "Porquoi aves-toi fait ça?" should be "Pourquoi tu as fait ça?"
livin-la-vida-loki-d chapter 3 . 1/29/2012
Also delicious (:

*bonne nuit, not bon nuit

*I've spent time in France, and I've never heard "foutre". "Putain" translates to "whore" but the French use that when they want to say fuck. :)
livin-la-vida-loki-d chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
That was delicious.

*L'information not la information.
Mirith Griffin chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
I noticed this in someone else's favorites. It's hot and brilliant, and it deserves waaaaay more reviews than this. Utterly charming. Well done.
Sir Stud Muffin chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Oh, Sherlock. *giggle*
Yuuma chapter 6 . 1/23/2011
Wow that was... Nice. And cute. And hot.

I seldom review fics that I read, but I really like your stories, all of them D

I was happy to see french in this story. That was nice... And very funny XD

I was "Oh, so that's how they would translate that in french ?", really interesting )

If you want, I could give you some advice about these translations, even if they're not very important (Yes I'm french, and sorry for any mistake I made here).

I hope you'll write more stories )
Cryptic Nymph chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Yay, I understood what you were saying! A good sign for my up coming French assessment. This fic was great, but I don't have sufficient time to read the rest of the chapters yet. I WILL BE BACK.
Zitronenbonbon chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
"some adults-only version of a Teach-Yourself-French language video"

brilliant! It made me ROFL. Well not exactly ROFL since I was in my bed and not on the floor but still :-P

I would SO buy this video. Maybe then I would eventually succeed to learn French. Not particularly helpful French for a day to day conversation but still...
regrette rien chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
To Lanie-

Thanks for the review, I lol'd a LOT! I know that water is not a lubricant, but haven't had it pointed out to me in comments before.

I also love the description of anal sex without lube.

Sounds terribly appealing. /sarcasm

Um... suspension of disbelief? *hopeful look*

Glad that you seem to have enjoyed the fic otherwise. :)

xxRegretteRienxx
Lanie chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
Very nice. Very hot.

One small quibble: sex in water is a Bad Idea (note capitals). As I read somewhere one time "anal sex without lubrication is like wearing corduroy and dragging yourself across carpet with your lips".

Water is not a lubricant!