|Reviews for When It All Comes Down|
| marionNCISlove chapter 20 . 10/19/2013
wahou ! just, amazing !
c'etait GENIALE !
i'm french and i've read your fic, it's just ... wahou ! !
| xxtivazonexx chapter 20 . 8/14/2013
Wow! Certainly one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. Love your story. Maybe you could write a sequel? :D
| mama's-broken-heart chapter 20 . 8/11/2013
Amazing, just Amazing story!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 20 . 8/10/2013
I just read that this is a completed story so yay! Everything will get resolved!
["Do something couple-like already!"] haha, she's adorable.
[I dunno about you, but I kind of really like living with you. A lot. ] *dies* *internally shrieking*
["Looks like I'm being tag-teamed." ] Have we ever seen two folks down there before? Of his team? Unless you count end of season...was it 3 or 4...
["I've been waiting for the change of address form for weeks. So who's going where?"] Can I just stop here and take a moment to address I'm in love with your writing talent and skill and how well you know and can show off the characters through your writing? :'-)
THE PACKING/COFFEE TABLE SCENE_-WHY CAN"T THIS BE A REALITY, omg-it's the highest degree of adorableness there is!
["Seriously Ziva, you are the only person I know who still has bookcases. Join the rest of us in the twenty-first century, wouldcha?"
"Gibbs has bookcases."
"I rest my case."] AND SO DO I! I repeat-highest degree.
["Eloping is starting to sound better and better,"] THE SOBER BIT AND THIS AND HIM ACTING ALL CUTE AND OMG!
[Her voice drifted off as Gibbs stepped forward, wrapping his arms around her petite form and hugging her tightly.
"You are my daughter, Ziver," he whispered in her ear. "And I would be honored to walk you down the aisle."] adksljlksfjd sfslkfj ajf :'-) CRYING HERE, CRYING HERE!
AUNT NETTIE. She was on the phone with Ziva and Tony in that one episode, right? I've been meaning to rewatch that scene after a few years!
["I do," and seeing her father's face in the shadows. But when she looked back again, he was gone.] *DYING* AWWWWWWWHHHHHhhh.
Ooooohhh-this is the last chapter, it just hit me. Cuz I'm like-whoa, wait-kids!? Pregnant-but EEK!
Well done, amazing job! :'-)
| mama's-broken-heart chapter 15 . 8/10/2013
Oh my gosh! This chapter! WOW it was amazing!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 19 . 8/10/2013
[ It is just not plausible that we will be able to spend every moment for the rest of our lives in each other's sights."] OH YES IT IS!
["I can go to my apartment tomorrow and pick a few things up."] hehehe.
THEY ACTUALLY BOTH KINDA CONFESSED THEIR LOVE TO EACH OTHER AND JUST LAKJFDJF -HOW IS THERE NOT MORE DETAIL TO THIS!? love it!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 18 . 8/10/2013
...I never thought that it'd be the bad guy dead...omg...life-saver here. thank you thank you thank you.
["Well…considering I called Ziva, I think I want to talk to her." ] hehehe-but so Ziva never woke up from a nightmare though!? Cuz I was waiting for that scene or some words on that and it never came! Yippee!
Awh man, loved the ending!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 17 . 8/10/2013
["You and McGee gossip like old women,"] Hehehehe.
["Oh. Oh. Did you guys—?"] Teehee, you gotta love Abby.
["Break her heart, and I break your neck. Do I make myself clear?"] zomg, haha.
[Gibbs was really going to have to take their heads and knock 'em together.] Dawwh.
Ah, so this takes place around season 8.
[The part that had shut off completely in the last month.
It was back with a vengeance now.] uh-oh.
oapfioprejfkdsj AJKDJFA KYOU CAN'T DO THIS-YOU CAN'T DO THIS-NO NO-ZIVA'S GONNA JUMP FOR IT NOW AREN'T YOU!? AKDFJDASFJLSADJFALSJF
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 16 . 8/10/2013
...I'm more blown away that as soon as I was done reading, when I reached the comment section, there wasn't words in here already from when I usually comment immediately after reading a paragraph. I was probably to engrossed in reading this-I feel like my mind's just travelled so much farther than I've actually been. I utterly love this :'-)
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 15 . 8/10/2013
[Realizing he had attracted the attention of his co-workers, Tony quickly shuffled out of the bullpen, walking towards the windows and talking in a low, fast voice. McGee looked over at Gibbs, who kept his eyes on his senior field agent's back, remembering all too well how it felt to get a surprise call from a clearly panicking Ziva.] Oooh, all of this, I just really love imagining it all.
[he'd give his life to be able to take all of this pain away from her.
But wasn't that exactly what had started this whole thing?] I definitely love this!
["If it was nothing then why did you call me sounding like you were in the middle of a panic attack? Why did I break fifty traffic laws trying to get here and find you curled up in a ball on your living room floor? Why were you clinging to me like your life depended on it?"] I love how well we know the characters now. Like I knew he'd (and she'd) pull this stunt.
[I want to help you, Ziva, but you have to let me. You have to talk, or I can't do a god damn thing."] Utterly love this.
["What would you have done if Gibbs had shown up at your door at six in the morning to inform you that there were complications overnight, and I was dead?" Tony's stomach flipped at the thought. ] Oh man, I am really going to sob now... and this is only the beginning.
["Don't—" Tony started to protest weakly. He didn't want to hear any more. He was becoming sorrier and sorrier he had pushed.] I'm bawling...
[Would you have admitted to Gibbs, of all the damn people in the world, that you were in love with your dead partner? ] The sound I just made was not human...but I understand why you loved this chapter, creating it.
[How would it have felt to look at me, and know that the last month had all been for nothing? Nothing!"] That's definitely what hurts the most.
["I wouldn't have been able to live with myself if…if it had been you that was shot—"
"So instead you make me live with it?" Ziva snapped, cutting him off. ] AHHHHH-THEY"RE BOTH ABSOLUTELY CORRECT AND I JUST DON"T KNOW WHAT TO DO OR HOW THIS"LL END!
...at the end...and ...still sobbing...
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 14 . 8/10/2013
June 2003...I wonder what's spectacular about that date.
["You know at the rate you people are going you're all going to have me as grey as Gibbs."
The image these words provoked had Ziva laughing, just a little. After a moment Abby began giggling unwillingly, and before long they were both cracking up, and the feeling felt so utterly foreign to Ziva after the last month of darkness and depression.
And she loved it.] DAWWWWWHHH :'-D Oooh, next is Chapter 15-the chapter you mentioned there's an emotional explosion. Can't wait!
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 13 . 8/10/2013
[Tony almost wished a casual observer would come through.] It's funny how so many of us wish other people would just note on two people who aren't together to look like a couple...just so we could get that thought instigated. Those are my favorite times when with a guy, ha.
Heh, another joke from our Ms. David. Love it D
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 12 . 8/10/2013
["Besides, knowing you, you would just push me into a wall as a joke."] Vhat? :'-) A joke? From Ms. David? I sense things are slowly getting back in order...before completely crashing in chapter 15 like Ziva had done so in season 10 after her father died.
["I understand. The nurse who brought the wheelchair in understands. Every patient on the floor who has heard this conversation understands. Now would you just sit in the chair ]... :'-) And THIS. This is one of the reason I loves Tiva.
["No, we're not," Tony agreed quietly. "But we need to talk and I can't have you trying to run. Besides," he added with a cock-eyed grin, "some of our best conversations have happened in elevators."
"Some of our worst too."] Hehe- love it. Wait, which one was one of their worsts conversations in the elevator?
I'm wondering if Tony's gone to his apartment and saw some of Ziva's stuff there? Wondering what his reaction would be.
Ah, so Tony doesn't know. Goodie!
[His eyes instantly landed on a plastic pill bottle next to the picture.
Oh no…] I nearly forgot about this part.
Ooh, well done.
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 11 . 8/10/2013
I utterly love this, and I now want to watch the "Come on, Ziva" scene from season 7 now.
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 10 . 8/10/2013
oOoh, Gibbs is telling Tony now about what happened to Ziva, yes!
[ "but you and I both know you are not going to change what you are thinking. So what is the point?"
Gibbs stared at Ziva for a long time. "You're doing it again," he finally said, earning himself a confused look.
"Shutting down.] This was really greatly written!
Oooh, a Tim/Tony scene-I'm sure it's going to be bittersweet!
[And she didn't think you died for her."] That definitely hurts. That's where the 'bitter' part comes.
["Do not go," she ordered in a small whisper. ] CRYING CRYING CRYING- YAY!
PS: The longer my reviews are, the more I love a story ;-)