Reviews for Deterred
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
Good and terrifying
TheNightOwl13 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
I liked it. You should make it a story instead of a oneshot! It would be totally awesome. 13/13 stars.
Night Owl
The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
this is very good!
Appleinn4 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Awesome story. I love this story and thoug I would see if there were any good fanfics for it. Guess there was.

Keep on writing
Lizzie10142 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Oh, please continue this. I really want to know what happens after.
heyheyhey chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
can you continue this? i would love to see your take on what else would happen aftewr something like this
lizard84 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
this was really good! it could be made in to a two-shot
SavingHumanity chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Oh hell yeah. Loving ittttt!