|Reviews for Vita Post Mortem|
| RedOfTheFourSword chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
OMG, you never fail to amaze me with your writing.
I love the opening - well, everyone loves a little Maiko sex - but I also love the premise of the story too.
Zuko's sure going to have his hands full with this unfortunate turn of events. I'm curious to see how he handles it.
| Darth Atrox chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
"Life After Death" Interesting title. This isn't gonna be a Zombie story is it? I'm not trying to sound like an ass or anything (you're a better writer than i am, and i really shouldn't be offering any criticisms, whether they're constructive or not) but isn't the Zombie theme a little worn out? There's video games movies, tv shows (the Walking Dead, for example). I just feel that the Zombie-theme has lost it's luster.
Regardless, it's your story, do what you want with it. All i can tell you is, good start. Your writing style is amzing, and smooth. it's very easy to enjoy one of your stories, and keep doing what you're doing.
| Akira Nishikawa chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
this looks good i will love to read more, although is kinda difficult imagine Mai and Zuko with one boy istead of the twins xDD still i will be waiting for your next chappie...
| chakragoddess chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Great hook for the beginning...ooi, what happens? What is it? More!