|Reviews for Alpha Protocol: G22|
| UnStellar chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
It's been a while since you posted this story but I feel like reviewing. I very much enjoyed this story! You did an excellent job, I VERY much enjoyed how well you portrayed all the characters. Especially Michael and Heck, I felt like I was playing the game, the dialogue was spot on. Creative and fun action, great pace, great portrayal of all the characters!
You have an excellent feel for fanfiction. I haven't had a piece of fanfiction grip me in quite some time, good job you! My only criticisim of this story is that I personally don't like SisXThorton, but that's a personal taste, and has nothing to do with your writing.
Keep on keepin' on,
| oathkeeper65 chapter 6 . 6/18/2013
I have to admit dude, for one of the only alpha protocol stories, I found this highly enjoyable. The ONE thing I did't like was the fact that you had MIke, go for a child. She can't be that old, based on what MIke says about her in the game. Overall 4/5
| AbsenceOfTruth chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
I want to read the full story!
| Major Plothole chapter 7 . 3/18/2013
Love it, was browsing seeing if anyone wrote a pairing of my favorite female lead from Alpha Protocol, and found this. Loved that game, and seriously - I loved reading this. It fit the characters both rather well, I like the quirky Mike, best way to play him I think. And I actually managed to not think of Mike's horrid voice actor while reading this (ha ha). So, thanks again for this and keep up the good writing!
| shadow1real chapter 6 . 3/13/2013
Thank you for this story it really finished the story for me I loved sis in the game and was sad that you couldn't do anything for her in the game but this is an amazing story thanks
| Stone chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
This story is an old favorite of mine.
Loved the Game
Love the pairing, very few good Sis stories
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/23/2012
that was pretty awesome :).
| Orumon chapter 7 . 7/27/2012
A very nice story. Shame we'd never get to see the continuing adventures of Mike Thorton and Sis, but oh well.
I guess there isn't enough material to go on with there. Shame there wasn't an alpha protocol 2, but that was because the game didn't sell.
| Bilbo chapter 7 . 7/8/2012
Cute story. I liked albatross so it's sad to see him turned into a nutty old man, but since it's for Sis' sake, I can't complain. Also, poor Mike, sounds like a painful experience, haha.
| Voodoo24000 chapter 7 . 2/2/2012
Great story, man. I love the way you portrayed Sis. Though (granted it wouldn't have helped the story much if you did this) I don't think Sis would even sign very much...just my opinion, though.
Also, I agree with Anime...um...I only memorized the first bit of their name, but that person...or robot. Where was Mina? Did she die? Cuz honestly I can't see her abandoning Thorton even after it's all over.
| beta111 chapter 7 . 8/17/2011
haha that was a great story you really portrayed Mike great and Sis too I think really great read and great comedy value
| That F.I.G chapter 5 . 8/5/2011
Aha loved your portrayal of Thornton in your works. The best parts of that game came from hammering the square button at any given chance. Bravo!
| BrazeRancor chapter 6 . 8/4/2011
Great work. I was thoroughly impressed with your PDF.
| General Herbison chapter 7 . 8/4/2011
Loved this fic :D I always did feel like helping Sis while I was playing the game. Great fic
| Anime-StarWars-fan-zach chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I just finished rereading this fanfic. I must say, it was still as enjoyable as the first time! Great job. You really ought to write more AP fanfics. You're good at it! I'd especially love to see more about the Adventures of Mike and Sis!
Though I do have a question about all this. Where's Mina in all of this? Did she and Mike part ways, or did she die, or...? Aside from that question, though, this was a really good fanfic.
Keep up the great and brilliant work!