|Reviews for A Delicious Experiment|
| Zellona chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Lovely story, but you changed from 1st to 3rd person half way through the story, and it was kinda more than my half asleep brain could handle; I had to go back and reread the paragraphs because the switch kept throwing me off and making me forget what I'd read.
But other than that, it's a pretty cool story! There aren't enough fics focusing on the pilot.
| jbug chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Nice! I liked it very much.
| FRANKENSTINWENTMAD chapter 1 . 1/19/2011