Reviews for The Ace of Spades
janneyt chapter 5 . 2/19/2011
Wow, that was really good!
CdrIvanova chapter 5 . 2/14/2011
What a AWESOME story! Thanks so much ...
MJLYP chapter 5 . 2/12/2011
I read this story picturing James as J the entire time.
blueeyes11354 chapter 5 . 2/12/2011
Hallelujah. That was actually pretty intense for a short story. Really well done - I enjoyed it. It was different than anything I've read in a while.
blueeyes11354 chapter 4 . 2/12/2011
It's actually kind of sad he didn't think of that on his own. I don't understand why guys think they need to go through all those theatrics just to propose - keep it simple, stupid.
blueeyes11354 chapter 3 . 2/12/2011
It's so different to have an E/B story from a third party's perspective. He is a little creepy but so monumentally screwed up too.
blueeyes11354 chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
Whew, I hoped he was delusional. He just saw what he wanted to see probably without any basis in reality.
blueeyes11354 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I should really be doing something else (homework) other than reading this story but seriously - that was so good. I honestly thought the guy was Edward, which I'm sure was you're intention. I love a good head fake. :D
Twinabler chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
I'll admit u got me there! I got super excited when we found who really was speaking! Awesome so far...I'm going to read the rest tonight!
Twinabler chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
I'll admit u got me there! I got super excited when we found who really was speaking! Awesome so far...I'm going to read the rest tonight!
bdubs chapter 5 . 2/9/2011
Found this story through PPSS. Awesome story. Very short, but still powerful and enthralling. Loved it :) Thanks for sharing it.
DeeDreamer chapter 5 . 2/9/2011
Very nice! Really refreshing to see this told from another point of view. xo ~DD
DeeDreamer chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
Oh...starting to feel sorry for him a bit now. He's a broken boy. xo ~DD
DeeDreamer chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
O.o... That was intense. xo ~DD
DeeDreamer chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Eeep! I loved the twist! I was totes thinking this was Edward narrating. Love it. Can't wait to read what's next. ;) xo ~DD
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