Reviews for For Every One Of Us Who Falls
curious viewer chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
This is a very interestin fic, and it seems to portrait the emotions of the guardsmen very well. i'm going to be following this fic.
BIBOTOT chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
Good job, but there are rooms for improvements:
Can't get enough of this, lengthen each perspective to make them it more clearly.
Fighting normal. Need to have something extraordinary, rather than cliches.
Be more specific as to how things are going. For example, guardsmen and heretics and Chaos Space Marines die, how and why did they die?
Bares His Teeth chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
intresting i like it so far thou i wouldent mind more detale
Boar Rushes Down The Mountain chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Thanks for reviewing. I'm always looking for ways to improve, and perspective is a good place to start. I'll look for a way to improve that right away. I'll try and put out more material as well, I'm working on a plan for these characters, particularly Vlad.

-Boar Charges Down The Mountain... For The Emperor )
W4RD06 chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Short and sweet, I like it. Almost like a memorial to all the different soldiers of the Imperium and what they do, yet they all die the same way, for the Emperor.

You've got a good idea here but there needs to be a clear cut way to divide one person's perspective from another, I had to go back and read parts a couple times to figure out exactly what I was reading.

Again, good idea, but it just needs a little refinement.