Reviews for Dragon Princess
DreamerAtDawn chapter 25 . 2/23
Wonderful story :) very interesting and attention grabbing. I couldn't stop reading :)
LadyRaider92 chapter 22 . 11/19/2014
I knew that Ruby was Rubeliara I saw that coming a mile away ;)
LadyRaider92 chapter 21 . 11/19/2014
I'm liking all of this excitement that is going on with the story... but I just realized that Duke has disappeared. Where did he go?
LadyRaider92 chapter 12 . 11/19/2014
Yeah. The gang is all together (in dragon form) and the story keeps on getting interesting.
LadyRaider92 chapter 3 . 11/18/2014
Darn (spoiler alert) I really like Derek.
kitanalao chapter 5 . 11/17/2014
waw... i chuckled my self reading this... good job...
kitanalao chapter 4 . 11/17/2014
nice progress... good job.
kitanalao chapter 3 . 11/17/2014
oh... poor derek. i see you made derek as anzu's first love... i hope anzu is alright...
kitanalao chapter 2 . 11/16/2014
hmm... nice progress... i like it.
kitanalao chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
intriguing idea, i'll put this into my fav list...
Idyllicdream chapter 4 . 9/17/2014
I think I'm finding a little bit problem with Anzu. You said she was brave, kind, graceful, sharp-tounged and all those things. But I've yet to seen Anzu live up to Derek's description. I think instead of just providing a few words to portray her you should focus more on actually building up her character, thoughts and dialogue. I find it quite surprising that Anzu would not think much of leaving home and concerned about Derek and palace servants at all. After all, aren't they now in the hands of her wicked step mother? At least she can show a bit worry over them. Anzu, as a dragon, shouldn't be ebtertaining thoughts of turning humans to sapphire unless she has to. That's not kind at all. And those men did not lie to her, they were probably bluffing and exaggerating. If i were Anzu, i would doubt whether they've even seen a dragon. It isn't very positive to assume others are liars so easily.
This fanfiction has so far shown many illogical contrasts. I hope you will improve this story in the future. It has much potential.
mewshoshe chapter 25 . 2/15/2014
Ahhhh I love it my fav
Luna Silveria chapter 25 . 1/6/2014
I loved it!
Wow chapter 25 . 4/7/2013
Very nice story.
Alaya Karangalan chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Interesting...
Definitely reading on...
:D
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