Reviews for Caught
jlslash chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
cute fanftion
Peacelovefairy chapter 2 . 7/19/2014
Nicely done hope your add more
Animecartooncomicgirl chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
as the cap gone nuts poor elisa
Calvin Sloan chapter 2 . 9/6/2013
You need to update soon. This is really good.
Calvin Sloan chapter 3 . 9/4/2013
you need to update.
creeves59 chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
You also called Belle, Bella. Still, it's a marvelous story. I just wish you'd update soon. Let me explain, I'VE WATCHED AND WAITED FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY TO BE UPDATED FOR 2 YEARS! Don't get me wrong, the chapters could be a little longer, but please update soon. T-T
Vanessa rodrigue chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Cool
DD chapter 3 . 6/22/2012
are you going to finish? you should
Scherherazade chapter 2 . 5/23/2012
Overall well written but the ending is a bit abrupt.
Nstone53 chapter 2 . 11/30/2011
loved it. A little sad it ended like it did but oh well. I enjoyed it. :D
Jazzys mom chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
wow I didn't even notice the name mix up...but I have done that before...I have to check out ur VD stories...oh and I didn't think the ending was bad
Jazzys mom chapter 3 . 2/15/2011
wow I didn't even notice the name mix up...but I have done that before...I have to check out ur VD stories...oh and I didn't think the ending was that bad
VladLover chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
totally hooked up with this

keep the good work, and update asap !
Spootzl chapter 2 . 1/20/2011
Intriguing! Can't wait for an update. Please post new chapters soon.

One little thing though - "Beauty & the Beast" is a very old tale and knowing Goliath's love for reading he'd most likely read or at least heard of it. ;-)

The modern Romeo&Juliet and that they killed themselves part was hilarious.
dragongirl chapter 2 . 1/20/2011
That's a really good story, I remember reading something similiar to this once! But you stopped rather abruptly, it could have been a little longer. I was reading it, and at the end asked myself what's going to happen to both of them now, that the secret is out? I would really like to see you write a sequel to this story!

Just one little criticism: You kept calling Elisa, Elena. Maybe just spellcheck the names more carefully next time. Otherwise, great story!
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