Reviews for Shining Cousins
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Cool story bro! But the only thing I had a hard time with are the names! Oyyy...they are soooo confusing...I'm not really used to their Japanese names. I had to look at bulbapedia every frikin time I encounter an unfamiliar name. Sometimes I had to guess!...though nobody cares about the last stuff I just said. Anyways good story bro!...or sis
Zionagi chapter 10 . 6/5/2013
Love the story so far! I never thought of Elesa and Volkner as cousins, but its an interesting rheory!
LoveGlutton chapter 10 . 2/6/2013
Is this before or after the whole pornography thing
LoveGlutton chapter 8 . 2/6/2013
Maybe you should pair fuuro and oba. They're both eccentric
Grey Muji chapter 10 . 1/27/2013
Hmm the battle was decent although it could have been better... But overall a good chap! Heh their lives are plagued with annoying redheads...!
Razeasha chapter 10 . 1/27/2013
I really like all of the chapters you've written. I wanted to let you know that even though you feel that battles are really hard to write, you did a great job! You kept the energy flowing and it never got boring! (I'm one of those people who usually gets bored with battle scenes, but I wasn't bored at all!)
weathersageK chapter 10 . 1/27/2013
Nice work man. It was good to see Denzi finally fight a good opponent after all since Kamitsure is the 4th gym leader after all whereas Denzi is the 8th back in Sinnoh it would be natural that Denzi would fight weaker opponents.
And trust me I can relate to you about the whole writing pokemon battle trouble. It feels like your dragging the same scene on forever but... well you just got to do it since this is what Pokemon is all about.
That being said great job and keep up the good work
ShadowGirl170 chapter 9 . 11/25/2012
Cute story
ShadowGirl170 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Couldn't pronouce Elesa's name...Jappenesse names are hard...
Padfoot Arcanine chapter 9 . 8/25/2012
Loved this! Can't wait to read more from you!
Guest chapter 9 . 7/18/2012
I love your stories. The character are interesting and we can really feels the different levels of intereaction between Denzi and Kamitsure. And the humour is also very funny. Please tell me me that you are going to continue this story. I really want to know how Denzi is going to deal with its situation.

Keep up the good work

rockbabyval chapter 9 . 5/26/2012
cloudfarron chapter 9 . 5/25/2012
I'm really living this take your time and please update
RosesOfTruth chapter 9 . 5/9/2012
Nice! I love ShockingShipping weather they are related or lovers. I also noticed that they live in opposite cites, just like you pointed out. Can you do a chapter on the cousins interacting with the the Kanto or Johto Gym Leaders? Preferably with the leaders of the same gender.
weathersageK chapter 9 . 4/27/2012
Nice work sempai!

You portrayed Kami's personality and reactions in a very believable way (especially because your absolutely right about the ranking system for the gym leaders/elite four)
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