Reviews for Map of the Problematique
It's good but chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Punctuation needs to go INSIDE the quotes - there are exceptions, but:

"I fucking hate not being able to hold my girlfriend's hand in public".

"I'm sorry",

"I love you".

should be written as

"I fucking hate not being able to hold my girlfriend's hand in public."

"I'm sorry,"

"I love you."
blue-peridot chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
you managed to give plain ol' smut a whole lot of emotion.
someWhereinRoma chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
this is really cute, love it~
HoldingontohopE chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
:)