|Reviews for What if|
| bookgirl113 chapter 14 . 4/9/2017
I love Char, but he is so self-righteous sometimes! Probably comes from being royalty tbh.
| andjelija.nenic chapter 6 . 2/23/2016
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
| CallmeSuzanne chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
Hey! I've just started your story and I must say that it is an nteresting beginning. You seem to really, really like getting review so here it is. Sorry for its shortness but I want to continue reading :)
| Julia chapter 22 . 8/5/2015
I loved it, and couldn't stop reading. I did, however, notice a few spots where it was dull - mostly because Emlyn hadn't been quite developed yet and beause Char was a bit OOC. I understand that he was under pressure and tension, but I thought I'd put it out there. The storyline was interesting and engaging, though I was kind of disappointed because I'm a Char fangirl. It was a great story. Keep it up! :D
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/29/2015
I love this idea of a what if char had caught her! Please keep it up! Even though I'm only on chapter 2 I love it! Thanks so much for writting it!
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/4/2015
Ella needs to be with Char!
| Lana Wickford chapter 21 . 4/12/2015
Nooo. You did a good job with Ella and Emlyn, I will definitely give you that. They seemed to fit, the way you wrote this. I am a Char/Ella person in the heart, so naturally, I am a little disappointed. I still want to give you good credits thought! It was a great story idea.
| Matharose111612 chapter 5 . 5/29/2014
That's soo cute! I love friends!
| sysoba chapter 5 . 4/25/2014
I love your writing! I'm a big "Ella Enchanted" fan, I love the book. After I finished the book, I wanted more "Ella Enchanted", and your writing really quenches that thirst as much as it can possibly be quenched. But I must say, your writing is well-written and very enjoyable for the reader. Love it!
| Leia chapter 21 . 4/23/2014
OMG that was the best story EVER! Thank you so much for writing this story! I've thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I'll make sure to read your other stories! I am a HUGE Harry Potter fan! Lol :D
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/23/2014
Emlyn, definitely :)
| KindaWishIWasAnnabeth chapter 20 . 4/21/2014
GREAT ENDING! (It wouldn't like me review on the last chapter)
| tgurl620 chapter 21 . 4/17/2014
I loved following your story and seeing where it would lead. Thank you for a good read :-). I hope your future stories are as exciting to read as this one.
| MusicSoul chapter 20 . 4/7/2014
THIS IS FANTASTIC!
I love your writing :)
Please include an epilogue, however you choose to end it so that we can see whoever Ella ends up with have babies and live happily ever after (I vote for Char)
OOOH Char is gonna be so jealous and it's gonna be so cute!
| Raina chapter 20 . 3/2/2014
So Ella isnt in love with char?