Reviews for Keeping Your Character |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wish you come back |
![]() ![]() I’m rereading this fic and it’s really great! I really enjoyed where you took the plot, and the ring battle specifically. It’s really cool to see Lambo go all out, and it makes sense that she would do it for her cat, and not respect for the guardian job or whatever. If you ever continue this I’d love to read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what's that flushing sound? oh just the story going to shi |
![]() ![]() ![]() more plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() more plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS STORY IS AWESOME |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this fic!Really curious what sort of thing does AF do to right the event after this tho, what with Lambo win and Tsuna didn't lose his Sky Ring in this fight |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome fic! Kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is absolutely amazing! I await more chapters PLEEEAAASE I can see you're relatively active through checking your Favourite List's upload dates, I hope you are well and didn't give up writing this amazing work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmoa! This is amazing! I hope you continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me you’re still writing this. It’s beautiful and we’re just getting to the good parts |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fight was awesome. I cannot wait for the reaction of everyone. I think that (at least for the next fight) Varia should fit more serious and there for be stronger. I always thought that in canon the Varia (with the exception of Levi, because he sucks) never took any fight really seriously. And it makes sense, their professional assassins and Tsuna and Co are teenagers or children, so why fight seriously? The only reason most of them lose is because hubris and plot-armor. The fight could also lead to a meeting between Lambo and Verde. Verde would probably be very interested in the fact that she made herself into a human rail-gun and she be curious about his knowledge of flames and any tricks he may be willing to reveal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story. Too bad I think it’s dead now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh, it seems she's straight |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy fucking damn in a sockdrawer this shit is EXTREMELY great. I really love how dynamic the story is and how full and unique and INTERESTING this Lambo has been made. Her relationships with Tsuna & Reborn are really intriguing to watch develop, as I think they are both getting a lot out of the association too. My favourite thing so far has been the addition of Mukuro, Chikusa & Ken. Mukuro in particular is fascinating to listen to in his POV with his relationship with Lambo and hope for a better world. The conversations between Lambo & Mukuro - particularly the one in her mindscape - are such a treat to read as well. I honestly wish more writers would explore Mukuro's character in this way. The moment when he discovered that he was not in a dream, but was actually with Lambo in her house, with Ken & Chikusa right there, was fucking GORGEOUS. I also think the limited interactions with Hayato, Ryohei, Kyoya and Takeshi would be really interesting to build on. |