Reviews for Keeping Your Character |
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shadowsdeep chapter 2 . 4/15/2011 Great to see another chapter and that you're continuing with this. I'm interested to see how your changes to the canon timeline cause things to play out in the future, nice work! |
AFC chapter 1 . 3/17/2011 I started dryheaving. Thank's alot, dammit! |
ladylookslikeadude chapter 1 . 2/14/2011 This...is very fascinating. It's an interesting idea, and very well written, so I can't wait to see what's coming up next. |
RivalAdmirer chapter 1 . 2/11/2011 (sheepish grin) Sorry about not reviewing before. I had some issues with my computer, needless to say, they are fixed now. Anyway, I thought the summary for this fanfic was interesting. It was attention-grabbing. I've always been fascinated by reincarnation for some reason. Plus the title is fitting for this. Admittedly I had wished you had updated one of your other fanfics, but this is awesome in it's own way as well. Honestly I'd doubt anyone would WANT to remember their birth. Besides I have a poor memory anyway, so it wouldn't really make a difference. I've never understood alcoholics either. Maybe it's temporary insanity that makes a person want to drink? Anyway moving on, what does DUI mean? I honestly have no idea what it means.(grin) I'm absolutely fascinated by your interpretation on what happens when someone dies. Your reason on why no one remembers anything from their past life. It's pretty realistic to me. I wouldn't want to be a prissy valley girl either, but generally one doesn't get to choose how you grow up to be.(slow blink) She being reborn as Lambo was totally unexpected. Lambo isn't really the most popular person that someone is reincarnated into. Mostly it's Tsuna or someone. I'm loving your characterization on this person. It's awesome.(nods) I'm going to have to agree with you, that is an mind fuck. And could cause some gender identity issues. I wouldn't want to relive my childhood no matter how good the benefits of knowing my previous life. Anyway, this was an awesome first chapter. Thank you for it. |
skyflyte12 chapter 1 . 1/22/2011 This is a fairly intriging start to a story, one i have not seen very often. As my attention has only very recently been caught by Katekyo Hitman Reeborn, I don't have a solid understanding of the genre (I haven't read the offical stuff yet, just fanfiction spins on it) I have no idea what your gunning for, but it has me interested, espically from what i've read of the kid the girl has been reincarnated into. There seems to be an unlimited potential for mayhem within this, as by my very little skimming of this, i have been surprised again and again that after checking out the reviews, the absolute wierdness of some of the characters can be considered canon. Anyways, I guess i just wanted to put a word in for you continuing this, and if you wanna read a good Naruto story that is bare-bones like this (hopefully to help with inspiration), check out 'Recca Potter and the Philosopher's Stone' by Aleh. Well, if you haven;t seen it already, that is. |
nekozr chapter 1 . 1/22/2011 ahhahahhaahahahaha! i love your story. i can wait for lambo to meet reborn and everyone else. are you going to give lambo a new name cause he's a girl or is it going to stay the same? update soon OK! |
queenfirst chapter 1 . 1/20/2011 UWAHHH! Awesome start! Love the summary, too! :D Hopefully you don't ruin this fic like many of the other authors... Um, that wasn't very encouraging, was it? ; Anyway, this OC fic is very detailed, has awesome vocabulary and grammar! IT HAZ BEEN DEEMED WORTHY. LOOOOOOOL. BAHAHAHA. Mind fuck. OMG, tumblr. :') I wonder how this will screw up the KHR plot. :] |
true black is white chapter 1 . 1/20/2011 WHY! WHY DO YOU ONLY HAVE ONE CHAPTER?ADD MORE DAMMIT! MMOOOORREEEE~! no sEriously it's a great start an I hope you ad more soon! ~ |
Lidi-sama101 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011 :D This is a very interesting concept! I can't wait for Lambo's new childhood, but I found the whole baby being a girl too convenient it would have been a challenge and far mind fucking if she was a boy. XD But whatever I still like this keep up the good work! |