|Reviews for Last of the Mohicans Script Revised|
| GingerBeef chapter 15 . 3/29/2013
I love this. Last of the Mohicans is easily one of my favorites but I've always wished there were more Alice/Uncas moments. Thank you for this! I will be eagerly awaiting more
| Strikergirl1 chapter 15 . 3/10/2013
I did enjoy this chapter very much, though I do wish there would be more Alice/Uncas interactions. Can't wait for your next one!
| Lana chapter 15 . 2/11/2013
you finally updated! thank you so much, I cant wait to read more
| tiamaria40 chapter 15 . 2/8/2013
Hope you continue to write and develop Alice's story.
| Maverick88 chapter 14 . 11/10/2012
Argh, it was just getting to the meat of the story! Very well written. I know you abandoned this quite some time ago, but I'd love to read more. *crosses fingers* Fun little fact about the movie: at the waterfall where uncas holds alice they shared a kiss but it was cut out of the final montage. In the scene after that however, Alice is seen walking with a braid that wasn't there before, put in by Uncas.
| Eilan21 chapter 14 . 3/21/2012
I like this version of the script so much!
Hope you to update it soon.
| lescornichons chapter 14 . 3/13/2012
More more more please!
| anuk chapter 14 . 12/1/2011
Yum, that was a chapter worth waiting for. Love how you have Alice misinterpreting Uncas' holding back as not liking her. What will happen next?
| Guinevere chapter 14 . 12/1/2011
Love it! Can't wait for the rest. And I agree with the others: please let them live.
| Guenevive chapter 14 . 12/1/2011
omg... ch 14! thank you, can't wait for more
| nipponophile chapter 14 . 11/30/2011
Ooh, that was a lovely little chapter full of Uncas-Alice goodness. Love the evolution of her innner monologue vis-a-vis her feelings towards him and the hug...
| Guenevive chapter 13 . 11/2/2011
this is awesome story, exactly what the movie should have been like. I really love it! keep writing and please please please PLEASE do not kill Alice & Uncas, I want them to be happy for a long time! they are my favourite movie couple :) p.s. sorry for my bad english, Im a foreigner
| tiamaria40 chapter 13 . 10/2/2011
I'm enjoying reading the script and it's changes. This is a favoritie movie of mine and I read anything fanfiction has to offer. I love when authors expand the Alice/Uncas relationship since there was a subtle hint of it in the movie and I always wish there had been more. Thanks for sharing your writing.
| DearestAmy chapter 13 . 9/14/2011
They should have used your script for the movie ! Your interpretation is great and Im amazed by your Alice and Uncas moments. Please create more of this.
| wisdomgirl chapter 12 . 6/2/2011
I watched this movie last weekend, and loved everything about it, except the end...I almost cried! Keep writing, and if its possible please don't kill Uncas and Alice (since you're writing this more about their love story anyways). But I digress because this is your fanfic and its really good so far.