Reviews for Paradise Lost
Fainfan chapter 5 . 12/26/2016
Omg the whole of the second year drama is awesome
Fainfan chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
Ur summary of ur fic suck TBH.
But ur first chapter really blew my mind. Glad I persevere to read thru it at least :)
kaycross1184 chapter 20 . 12/14/2016
I really hope you're able to return and complete this story. It's AMAZING! I love Dark!Harry
grayceg chapter 20 . 12/2/2016
this story is excellent and totally unique from any of the others that i've read! Great job! I just wish you had finished it!
Nihilism's Cat chapter 20 . 11/27/2016
Last updated 2012... Ohhh boy another for the "hasn't updated in a long time but is really good so I'm gonna follow it anyway and hope for the best" pile... I really hope you do update. I really like the plot and this Harry is feisty! It's pretty cool that you've got so many Faust references in here as well as a cameo for Malphas! Ever since I learned Sebastian's real name I can't think of him as anyone else... I love this story and if you have run out of ideas on it PM me because gosh do I have a LOT of ideas for this fic Anyway keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 20 . 11/26/2016
I know it has been a while, five years in internet culture being practically ages. But I firmly believe in letting people know when I enjoyed their creations. I found this story a while back, and I keep coming back to it. I love how fiercely independent Harry is, how different from Voldemort. We see him grow throughout the story, and I like how he handles his relationships. I know this is an abandoned work, and I don't even know if you even get this review. Anyway, it's been a delight, thank you for sharing and leaving it up.
blossom555 chapter 18 . 11/21/2016
i love u for the black butlersmirks) reference, my inner fangirldemon) was very happy if u ever need a hand ill be...more then willing .
Baxter87 chapter 20 . 10/29/2016
Hope you finish this wonderful story one day!
BloodLikeRubies chapter 20 . 10/24/2016
angeleyes7084 chapter 3 . 10/21/2016
loved the first chapter
DeiStarr chapter 20 . 10/20/2016
I can't even BEGIN to tell you how much my heart aches to know that this story is unfinished. It is a work of art; a stunning masterpiece of creativity that thrills me to my bones. Will you ever complete it?

I love each and every one of your characters to pieces... Tom, Voldemort, Draco, Severus, Hermione, Lucius, Narcissa... and, of course, Harry. They're so beautifully written, and the way they change as circumstances change is completely IC and believable for it to actually happen with their canon selves if circumstances went the same way as in this fic. Frankly, you write them richer and simply better in every way than they are in canon - Rowling's characterization falls flat next to yours. (Considering the massive discrepancy between the amount of writing she did to get up to the same point in the storyline as you did, and the amount you've written up until you stopped wtiting this, that's saying something!)

I have a feeling that Harry's date for the Yule Ball will be Diary!Tom - that he'll find a way to rescue his dear friend from Dumbledore's clutches, and build him a body the way he did with Voldemort (even if it's only a temporary one); then weave a ward to prevent anyone from recognizing him. Diary!Tom would have a great deal more respect for and understanding of Harry, along with more willingness to treat him as an equal. Since he knows Harry better than Voldemort does, he'll understand Harry's character too well to do otherwise. Plus, he's sixteen.

(No matter how long ago he was created, he's mentally frozen at sixteen forever. (Though he can't - doesn't just... I was seventeen. But at least Harry - or at least as long as he doesn't have a body he is. Meaning that his body and his brain chemistry are still stuck in the stupid, irritating, general school things and relationship issues, and going through a sexual identity crisis - they felt it was saving people's lived up to the chain... not-an-inconsiderable that we recruit them... it's basically where he was before getting pregnant... Severus basically tells Harry, "Thank you for making me talk about it; it was really cathartic and helped me start to get past it. It probably would have become a raw, festering wrong if I just kept on ignoring it."); so he would be much less inclined to dismiss Harry for his youth. (Of course, if the body is without it's okay to to was s permanent, you could always turn on them if don't want people this into a Tom/Harry/Voldemort fic... he's probably enough of a narcissist to be in a triad with himself.)

There's also the option of Harry and Diary!Tom realising that Voldemort is mentally unstable, and devising a way to merge his soul with Diary!Tom to help make him more balanced (which leads to Voldemort becoming a combination of Diary!Tom and himself).

I'm also dying to find out what Harry's building. I'm guessing either an escape method (like a portkey, modified to get through the wards), or some kind of ward to keep Lucius (and Severus... and Narcissa, Draco, and Hermione) safe from Voldemort exacting revenge on Harry by hurting them - either himself or through one of his followers... it could be based on Voldemort's magic, either from himself or from anyone baring his Mark. (I think he'd probably make both, tbh.) I also think he'd build some kind of ward to keep Voldemort from Marking him, or swear an oath on his magic that if Voldemort Marks him or binds him in any way, he will not rest until Voldemort has been completely and permanently destroyed.

Yeah, it would piss Voldemort off, but it would also prove just how serious he is. There's *also* the option of him creating a ward that stops Voldemort from leaving the room via physical or magical means, summoning Feindfyre to bind him, and threatening to set him alight unless he swears an oath on his magic that he won't attempt to Mark or bind Harry in any way, and he won't harm anyone Harry cares about as revenge against him - either himself or through any of his followers. (There's also the option of Harry creating his own Mark and placing it on Voldemort when he's not expecting it - one that will keep Voldemort from Marking him in return, or from exacting revenge against Harry or his loved ones. Turnabout is fair play and all.)
Locket1 chapter 20 . 10/19/2016
Wip's are so sad. This had potential. I'll hit the follow button but won't hold my breath.
Jeannetic chapter 20 . 10/18/2016
I love this fic so much! Can't wait to read more!
Kaylinezz chapter 3 . 10/16/2016
Ooohhhhhhhhh CRAP
I like this Harry
Just please don't get possessed by the Dark.
SortingHat chapter 2 . 9/16/2016
I'm not *blown away* most people are afraid to criticize in this generation due to decades of programmed brainwashing and manipulations that is like a slow pressure cooker done on purpose by who we don't really know.

No matter how fucked up a fanfiction is they will literally give it good reviews out of fear or stupidity.

This generation is afraid to stand up to what's right and as soon as the social welfare machine runs on fumes the ugly side of world humanity will show as they don't know HOW to take care of themselves.

Entire nations will rise and fall on a fast track. The train is a coming and it's too late to stop it.

Obama and Bush running twice is good proof of stupidity as both helped the global elite.

Best thing anybody can do is prepare for the coming crisis.
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