Reviews for Paradise Lost
Friglit chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
gah! Words cannot describe how much I love this fic! Seriously cannot wait for an update!
Lytari Talon chapter 3 . 1/30/2011
So far I really like this story! I just had a question that I didn't want to forget: Considering that flying lessons take place so early in the year, how does Slytherin already have 200 points for Harry to lose? And if he was to make the points back with Quidditch, shouldn't he have lost 150 points as that is the number the snitch gives?

Otherwise, great so far;)
Dreamwriter613 chapter 2 . 1/30/2011
This story is starting off nicely. I can't wait to read more.
missax chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
Very nice! I love Slytherin!Harry AUs. Keep up the good work and I'm hoping to see Tom in later chapters!
She92 chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
Amazing fanfiction! So very well written and such a nice plot! I am looking very much forward to the next chapter!
Moonlight black rose chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
oooohhhh I like the dark Harry very much! :D
WynterRavenheart chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
Harry, Harry, Harry... nurture's call is a bitch isn't it?
Nothingburger chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
nice i can't wait for next chapter
Would've0Could've0Should've chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
It was around the third chapter when I stopped and thought "Holy Crap! This story is GOOD!" and well it is. I've just been having sucha hard time finding good Harry/Voldemort stories now a days that I had begun to think no one was writing new ones! But this idea is so clichè and has been done so many times before, but you make it seem original. It's just so magneficently written! I love Harry's relationship with Hermione and Draco and Snape and well everyone! It's just written so well and it just flows splendidly! I have to wonder though, can you write/read Anglo-Saxon? Just wondering!

Please update again soon!

Shey92 chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
ooooh this is great I am really looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon :)
awertvegtr chapter 9 . 1/30/2011
OK, after my own fangasmic moment of the 150th review (I just read the A/N on how the 150th review would get a short story, thought 'huh' and turned to the next chapter, where I saw 149 reviews, hahaha) I would just like to say how awesome your story is.

I love the descriptions - you manage to write the sights and the sensations wonderfully - but most of all I love how you capture the emotions. When Dumbledore took Tom's diary away from Harry, I was really angry; when Draco and Harry went to meet the Bulgarian Quidditch team, I got all fagasmic (LOL, I seem to be using the word 'fangasm' a lot... I just learnt it in the chapter).

I think you're an awesome writer - I would love to be able to volunteer as a beta for you, but unfortunately Real Life interferes too often and I can barely get my own chapters written, let alone read and help with somebody else's. Stupid Real Life. D:

Anyway, so what about that short story? ;) Do you reply, what? I can't wait - I love your writing style, I really want to read a short story of yours! (Wow that sentence was grammatically wierd)

I'm going to go back to reading your amazing story - it's long AND it's Harry/Tom/Lord Voldemort! I love it!

Hugs and inspiration vibes,


PS: I almost forgot: UPDATE SOON! 3
awertvegtr chapter 8 . 1/30/2011
Muahahaha! 150th Review! Do I get my short story now?
Ralia chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
The whole time since I saw the topic of this chapter and the shortness of it, I kept thinking, "No cliffhanger, no cliffhanger, no cliffhanger." And there wasn't a cliffhanger!
SeasonsInReverse chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
Looking forward to your next update. Excellently adapted from the beginning of cannon, and I'm excited to see where you take this story, and what you'll have happen to this Harry Potter.
Ralia chapter 7 . 1/30/2011
You..killed him...:(

But at least Harry's turning out pretty interesting.
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