Reviews for Paradise Lost |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sirius. Did you really need to have him kissed? Please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Color me impressed. I wait eagerly for more. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. Although there do exist "good intentions" for at least two of the unforgivabls, jsyk. Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() i'm interested! ooh wonder how your harry is going to turn out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant as ever, Rune teacher is very interesting character and everyhting written so well! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, good chapter. I'm glad Harry's starting to consider the morality of his actions. The purely evil twelve-year-old was starting to get a bit unrealistic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one was fun, hope u'll update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! another update! I really love it! good jod can't wait for 4th yr! please please please dont kill sirius! update soon! ;) |
![]() ![]() You know if I had any complaints it would be that, with the fast pace of this first years (I know, I know, the action really starts at year 4), it feels weird to see Harry so corrupted already. Yes, two years is a long time, but it doesn't feel that long this way. |
![]() ![]() Ha ha, I've always wanted to see that happen. |
![]() ![]() So funny! Wasn't really expecting his teeth to fall out. lol :) So many stories have "over use" of lemon drops. Loved the chamber/snake interaction. Keep up the good work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA Harry made Dumbledore toothless! Using his lemon drops! Justice is served, with a big helping of humour. I love the story's plot. It's so funny and real. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the ending to this chapter. It was severely funny. How long is Dumbledore going to stay without teeth? Did you post chapters 2, 3, 4, and 5 all in one day, or did I somehow miss the updates...? Anyways, Harry is a mischievous little boy, isn't he? In a kinda Dark way. I like it. I picture him to have something of a permanent smirk on his face, kinda like the Weasley Twins, only a little smaller and much more sly. I wonder how Remus is going to take Harry being in Slytherin? I kinda feel bad for Dumbledore, with Harry hating him and making the poor man out to be an evil person who wanted Harry to suffer. I can't tell if you want Dumbledore to appear like that or what, but I can say that it's kinda funny. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HaHaHa...That's was a funny surprise that Dumblemore lost all his teeth, I can't wait to the third year. |