Reviews for Paradise Lost
Luiz4200 chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
Poor Sirius. Did you really need to have him kissed? Please update.
TisonlyMeNow chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
Color me impressed. I wait eagerly for more.
maryaminx chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. Although there do exist "good intentions" for at least two of the unforgivabls, jsyk. Update soon please!
anno chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
i'm interested! ooh wonder how your harry is going to turn out
Zana20 chapter 6 . 1/25/2011
Brilliant as ever, Rune teacher is very interesting character and everyhting written so well!

Thank you!
Reenan Lefey chapter 6 . 1/25/2011
Hmm, good chapter. I'm glad Harry's starting to consider the morality of his actions. The purely evil twelve-year-old was starting to get a bit unrealistic.
Eva9673 chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
This one was fun, hope u'll update soon
brightsun89 chapter 6 . 1/24/2011
Yay! another update! I really love it! good jod can't wait for 4th yr! please please please dont kill sirius! update soon! ;)
Martel chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
You know if I had any complaints it would be that, with the fast pace of this first years (I know, I know, the action really starts at year 4), it feels weird to see Harry so corrupted already. Yes, two years is a long time, but it doesn't feel that long this way.
Martel chapter 4 . 1/24/2011
Ha ha, I've always wanted to see that happen.
Sunny chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
So funny! Wasn't really expecting his teeth to fall out. lol :) So many stories have "over use" of lemon drops. Loved the chamber/snake interaction. Keep up the good work. :)
Peirl chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
HAHA Harry made Dumbledore toothless! Using his lemon drops! Justice is served, with a big helping of humour.

I love the story's plot. It's so funny and real.

Keep writing!
npetrenko chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
Well done. More please!
Kichi Hisaki chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
I liked the ending to this chapter. It was severely funny. How long is Dumbledore going to stay without teeth?

Did you post chapters 2, 3, 4, and 5 all in one day, or did I somehow miss the updates...?

Anyways, Harry is a mischievous little boy, isn't he? In a kinda Dark way. I like it. I picture him to have something of a permanent smirk on his face, kinda like the Weasley Twins, only a little smaller and much more sly.

I wonder how Remus is going to take Harry being in Slytherin?

I kinda feel bad for Dumbledore, with Harry hating him and making the poor man out to be an evil person who wanted Harry to suffer. I can't tell if you want Dumbledore to appear like that or what, but I can say that it's kinda funny.

Update soon!
Shalette chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
HaHaHa...That's was a funny surprise that Dumblemore lost all his teeth, I can't wait to the third year.
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